Thursday, September 30, 2010

Joyous Stars Arrive..









Written for Haiku My Heart
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Happy Earth Invites;
And sliding down a Rainbow
Joyous stars arrive..



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Colourful stripes
Of cut rainbow, sway in sky
Teased by winds..

20 comments:

  1. Beautiful imagery created by the sliding stars on a rainbow and the swaying rainbow in the wind. Good work !!

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  2. I like the idea of sliding down a rainbow, :(

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  3. I love you haikus, they paint such beautiful pictures.

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  4. Super cheerful! I like this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  5. I love the thought of sliding down a rainbow. Beautiful haiku!

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  6. A whimsical look at the universe, I like both your haiku. I'll look for that rainbow in the sky and watch the stars tumble down intom the heavens. Thank you.

    Peace.

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  7. good morning ramesh,
    so glad to see you return to this friday salutation.
    love your focus on joy...
    shall we all arrive!

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  8. "joyous stars arrive"

    What a lovely phrase!

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  9. I like "teased by winds..." My grandson (age 3) is 'helping' me read haiku this morning and he really likes your rainbow. He especially likes the idea of "sliding down a rainbow" - sounds like fun to me, too!

    ~Deb

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  10. Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Where is the rainbow?since long I am searching.....
    Wishing you a lovely weekend,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  11. I like the second one much better than the first, but enjoyed the fact that they're paired.

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  12. I love your beautiful haikus, you are very talented :)

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  13. Ramesh,
    You have the true gift of Haiku and you bring joy and an open heart to all who read what you have written. Thank you for sharing.
    Noelle

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  14. happy earth is a wonderful joyous phrase...

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  15. This is a real nice haiku Ramesh. I do understand that this one of the most read haiku by your hand is. I think you did a good job here.
    Lovely imagery.

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