Monday, April 25, 2011

Flame of candle flickers



Just for the 'Haiku' of it.....



Flame of candle flickers
Can’t even handle my soft breath
Why to get closer..



By: RS  : )

6 comments:

  1. Ah, yes. The tension in this poem is palpable.

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  2. You nervous? Never!
    Another nice one from you, Ramesh.

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  3. just loved it ramesh. its so true.

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  4. The candle though emitting light, still am scared of it, to get closer!

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  6. Brain says let it glow at a distance then, at list there will be light... going closer may blow it out, but the heart says... go closer, it makes me breathe... :) :)

    Beautiful sir :)

    Regards

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