Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Will My Grey Turn Black..


The Height of Haiku Challenge... Day 14.. ELIXIR


It's deep inside me
Fountain of elixir, hey
Will I  find the switch..

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Will my grey turn black
With a sip of Elixir
Don't answer; grey's fine.

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Ant wants elephant
To drink Elixir, perhaps
He will lose some weight..


RS : )

9 comments:

  1. All three good, but the last is hilarious!

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  2. LOL!! RS you are at your riotous best today!! Grey is just fine with me too!! :) You topped yourself again!! :D

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  3. Ah Ramesh, you are both funny and clever. Loved them all...

    Melanie

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  4. Ant wants elephant
    To drink Elixir, perhaps
    He will lose some weight..

    Elephant wants Ant
    To drink a lot of caffeine
    And buzz in his ear

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  5. I'm still preferring the elephant haiku over all. :)

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  6. Would the ant be happy if the elephant lost weight? Just wondering...

    A Little Elixir

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  7. You made me smile with your last two haikus RS :)

    I wonder why your favorite topic always delves on an ant and an elephant...:)

    Anyways, I am always entertained you know :)

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  8. I enjoyed all three, but the last one made me laugh; if only there were a true weight loss elixir... ;)

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