Friday, March 8, 2013

'Birds' Soar in My Words..

Written for Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart : Friday
 

And for Leo's
Haiku Heights


and for One Single Impression



 

'Birds' Soar in My Words..
 
 
I hear them sing songs
of so many bright colours;
origami birds

Origami birds
rest quietly on wooden shelf;
she is an artist

She is an artist,
gives life and wings to paper;
'birds’ soar in my words

'birds’ soar in my words,
cuckoo, linnet and sparrow;
You see them all there

You see them all there
in the vast sky of your mind;
 words become love birds..

Words become love birds;
haiku spill around all as
I hear them sing songs…


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Specailly created for One Single Impression


A Golden Cage Hangs

I hear birds sing songs
and cross over to peep in;
a golden cage hangs

A golden cage hangs
in an airy balcony;
 trees sway with the wind

Trees sway with the wind,
those residing there are quiet;
helpless I move on..



RS:)

27 comments:

  1. Bravo!
    Two artists are better than one...
    ♥♥

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  2. What wings and song you gave the birds today as well !
    Happy Friday !

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  3. Yes I did see them. Your singing words showed them to me.

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  4. what lovely images swell in my mind from your wonderful verse!

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  5. How you made those paper birds sing!

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  6. I love your haiku chains -- so satisfying.

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  7. oh ramesh,
    your haiku "song" is sweet beyond measure!! so glad you are here sharing your joy with us all!

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  8. Combining haiku and origami... you are wonderful Ramesh! Enjoy your weekend!

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  9. YOUR WORDS REFRESHING MINDS....WHAT A VERSE!

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  10. words become love birds...beautiful set of haiku, very lyrical!

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  11. Very beautiful composition!

    She is an artist,
    gives life and wings to paper;

    in the vast sky of your mind;
    words become love birds

    Ahh! These lines are super awesome!!

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  12. I feel each piece becoming bird and love and variety and song. A lovely haiku chained origami of poetry.

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  13. a soaring set...I love the words becoming love birds...

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  14. Ramesh, these are so lovely - they make me ashamed of my flippant response to the prompt, but I really am in a rush!

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  15. Your word circle is
    beautiful origami
    Thank you for sharing!

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  16. Beautiful imagery in these. I hear them tweeting in my head.

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  17. Thanks for filling my heart with light and breath this morning with your haiku birds.

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  18. Nice Ramesh. They flow like birds in flight. Tigerbrite

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  19. Wonderful, so loving your use of the cross prompt
    llmcalling.blogspot.co.uk/2013/03/cross.html

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  20. Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!
    Free the birds!!!

    I have on my YouTube a monkey in his cage. I took it while visiting Guatemala and the monkey was in a little garden at our hotel.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=asGhCioHqow&list=UUEjMkA89fSJt4TfR_94fuDg&index=9

    I have deleted some negative comments concerning his captivitey. Please pardon the poor video in the beginng. It seems to have deteriorated somewhat from the last time I viewed it.
    ..

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  21. It's such a pleasure reading these haiku. I loved both the individual ones and the chain haiku.
    Cheers!

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  22. Very lyrical and flowing.

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