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Careful, Hug, Mistake
A Haiku
She hugs my dreams tight,
careful, no mistake there;
I dare dream stealers
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I dare dream stealers
to cross over their doubts;
She hugs my dreams tight
She hugs my dreams tight
and then folds them pretty neat;
winged birds, fly not
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I dare dream stealers
to cross over their doubts;
She hugs my dreams tight
She hugs my dreams tight
and then folds them pretty neat;
winged birds, fly not
RS:)
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interesting choice of words...
ReplyDeleteShe hugs my dreams tight...the phrase surmounts in expression in each para! interesting!
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