Friday, February 7, 2014

Helpful Winds Arrive... Haiku..



Haiku My Heart





each flutter of wings
takes him to a higher point;
helpful winds arrive

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helpful winds arrive
and he glides smoothly;
a happier she..

RS:)

7 comments:

  1. These helpful winds lift my spirit! Beautiful haiku for him and for her and for us! Thank you Ramesh!

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  2. She's happy because he's gliding away? Oh, dear, I hope not! ;)

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  3. As long as they are happy.. Nice haiku

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  4. a wonderful twist at the end with the shift in gender.

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  5. Connection of he and she, well done.

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  6. sounds similar to "happy wife, happier life" but with the male & female interchanged !

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