tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post2344154480581031711..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Beginning & StruggleRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-14660042990283450252012-04-26T10:32:50.283-07:002012-04-26T10:32:50.283-07:00Felt like reading short Haiku, read in one breath,...Felt like reading short Haiku, read in one breath, Rameshji. It's unbelievable and can't be imagined or can't be understood. I could read only. Especially the pain at the time of birth, losing the twin...it's so rare. I wonder how you wrote, but then felt, I don't wonder because only a heart who has pain can write......Mohini Puranikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11971969513354282016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-62940803291484492422012-04-26T07:44:15.339-07:002012-04-26T07:44:15.339-07:00Wow!....Very touching and beautiful poem....I didn...Wow!....Very touching and beautiful poem....I didn't find it very long..Read within few minutes....beautifully expressed....! and I am sure God is smiling reading this one!Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-63179675258103938742012-04-25T15:45:22.268-07:002012-04-25T15:45:22.268-07:00A heartfelt and moving piece ~A heartfelt and moving piece ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23885216055796177822012-04-25T15:19:29.630-07:002012-04-25T15:19:29.630-07:00Beautiful, even now.Beautiful, even now.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-22910644600152803142012-04-25T12:04:58.898-07:002012-04-25T12:04:58.898-07:00I never usually have the patience to read long poe...I never usually have the patience to read long poems... but once i started, i just dint kno when it was over... It's such a beautiful and touching story Ramesh ji! The tricks and treats of nature is something we will never truly understand i guess!Pranitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15561255344238245261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-21432825878099468222010-08-18T01:58:06.702-07:002010-08-18T01:58:06.702-07:00Lovely ! Its such a beautiful poem that I am right...Lovely ! Its such a beautiful poem that I am right now searching for words to type down here ...<br />"And wrapped in cotton<br />A part of their souls"<br />I loved the 2 line so much ..<br /><br />And the haikus are wonderful ! Even I have stepped into the world of Haikus just sometime back ,and finding it quite fun :) Its refreshing to see your different take on prompts ! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-31852661902580998662010-08-17T11:08:49.389-07:002010-08-17T11:08:49.389-07:00कृपया हिंदी में भी लिखे.कृपया हिंदी में भी लिखे.अनामिका की सदायें ......https://www.blogger.com/profile/08628292381461467192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-55369335439447111062010-08-17T09:05:57.213-07:002010-08-17T09:05:57.213-07:00Liked very much your way of writing.
Smiles :)
P...Liked very much your way of writing.<br /><br /><br />Smiles :)<br />PrashantAll Is Wholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02839098888080472278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10452422388421948142010-08-17T09:03:32.717-07:002010-08-17T09:03:32.717-07:00I thank all of you to have always encouraged me wi...I thank all of you to have always encouraged me with your comments.. Let us continue to share..and enjoy. Here's wishing you happiness..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-71616168797821739852010-08-17T06:21:45.224-07:002010-08-17T06:21:45.224-07:00What a story!! Well written- and your haikus are...What a story!! Well written- and your haikus are awesome- you did a really great job on them. I especially like the 1st haiku and the line "won without struggle"- and the ways to interpret that line.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61202395188496841922010-08-16T20:32:55.451-07:002010-08-16T20:32:55.451-07:00Great job, I love the flow of the story :D and the...Great job, I love the flow of the story :D and the haiku is great ;DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-76676873138866710012010-08-16T11:41:16.655-07:002010-08-16T11:41:16.655-07:00Haiku's are like instant connect..
Beginning w...Haiku's are like instant connect..<br />Beginning was like keep the journey going..Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13473845080606323827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-71800451304078932042010-08-16T09:38:07.383-07:002010-08-16T09:38:07.383-07:00Beautifully written. From the heart, that's fo...Beautifully written. From the heart, that's for sure. Nice work with a wonderful prompt.Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-40480275430878085062010-08-16T07:25:40.015-07:002010-08-16T07:25:40.015-07:00Isn't it amazing? Each response is so differe...Isn't it amazing? Each response is so different! Nice story, I could see it all.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-5355125737605006012010-08-15T23:27:09.859-07:002010-08-15T23:27:09.859-07:00This is a very beautiful poem on beginning...:)
T...This is a very beautiful poem on beginning...:)<br /><br />The joys, the pains, sorrows, sunrise, sunset!<br /><br />Success, failures!!! One can really relate to your words!!!<br /><br />And yes, you're becoming a haiku connoisseur! Keep up!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-73862657327828496932010-08-15T17:20:14.775-07:002010-08-15T17:20:14.775-07:00Wonderful material posted! Excellent take on the p...Wonderful material posted! Excellent take on the prompt!<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-41422946504910419722010-08-15T09:51:06.359-07:002010-08-15T09:51:06.359-07:00very touching narration here Ramesh ji.. its not a...very touching narration here Ramesh ji.. its not a struggle to read when the flow is smooth :)<br /><br />and yes, the haikus are excellent :DVinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-42299466297830678342010-08-15T09:17:40.195-07:002010-08-15T09:17:40.195-07:00A beautiful, heartfelt narration.
Excellent.A beautiful, heartfelt narration.<br />Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-22983533296851435302010-08-15T09:04:06.134-07:002010-08-15T09:04:06.134-07:00Loved how you narrated it..
red sandLoved how you narrated it..<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/red-sand.html" rel="nofollow">red sand</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61579341243871415832010-08-15T05:15:44.703-07:002010-08-15T05:15:44.703-07:00A story well narrated.
Haiku is excellent. Love i...A story well narrated.<br /><br />Haiku is excellent. Love it.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-54509445008868446472010-08-15T04:59:06.293-07:002010-08-15T04:59:06.293-07:00How can a mind struggle to read a story as beautif...How can a mind struggle to read a story as beautiful as this. Heartfelt and heartbreaking at the same time. Less can be more, but this was just right. Good morning from Ohio. Rob.<br /><br />p.s. And yes, I was sooo anixous about the OSI prompt, I posted a day early. Caught me! :oLoch Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-1399237979392204982010-08-15T04:41:46.193-07:002010-08-15T04:41:46.193-07:00I struggle to write long poems--which is why scrib...I struggle to <i>write</i> long poems--which is why scribbling haiku is so soothing to me!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2010/08/15/haiku-heights-struggle/" rel="nofollow">My Haiku Heights</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52245368227705640102010-08-15T03:19:12.178-07:002010-08-15T03:19:12.178-07:00Nice oneNice oneJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.com