tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post2646052211588483826..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: A Hiku for 3wwRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-31288955667281734472010-11-28T22:26:00.619-08:002010-11-28T22:26:00.619-08:00LOL. almost too easy. But I don't write Haik...LOL. almost too easy. But I don't write Haiku. My short story is a continuing serial, and these words just didn't fit for where I wanted to go next.<br /><br />I liked this though. Simple and deep.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61517456320877770182010-11-27T21:31:22.332-08:002010-11-27T21:31:22.332-08:00Tautly built around the first word. Good one this....Tautly built around the first word. Good one this.Vivekanand Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09707039058447478215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23202223751369324762010-11-26T11:58:13.649-08:002010-11-26T11:58:13.649-08:00'shuffling through the sheets of dark past'...'shuffling through the sheets of dark past', very subtle way of showing the angst =)Uttarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07438765335471177941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61873996792684534142010-11-26T08:08:51.177-08:002010-11-26T08:08:51.177-08:00Very clever Haiku! Your words evoke in me, sympath...Very clever Haiku! Your words evoke in me, sympathy and intrigue for the aging panderer.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16400341099865972065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-37003013889251132212010-11-25T19:37:04.475-08:002010-11-25T19:37:04.475-08:00go for light..
bright Haiku...go for light..<br />bright Haiku...Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-71809847647457751272010-11-25T19:04:48.819-08:002010-11-25T19:04:48.819-08:00The shuffling through sheets of dark past is brill...The shuffling through sheets of dark past is brilliant :)Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07013993041882385722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-89532136395624848182010-11-25T06:06:14.895-08:002010-11-25T06:06:14.895-08:00fantastic image in a wonderfully written haiku..th...fantastic image in a wonderfully written haiku..thanks for sharing with osw...peteOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-72884466149439736462010-11-25T00:47:47.326-08:002010-11-25T00:47:47.326-08:00What an imagery created here!! The old hand going...What an imagery created here!! The old hand going through her rough dark past!! Sort of echoes in the ears.Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-20516113923330690072010-11-25T00:35:15.130-08:002010-11-25T00:35:15.130-08:00She needs to come out of the dark past.. This haik...She needs to come out of the dark past.. This haiku thing is really a challenge and you are mastering itBeyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13473845080606323827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-76308547019938019252010-11-24T18:42:41.374-08:002010-11-24T18:42:41.374-08:00Excellent. Takes into the mind of panderer.Excellent. Takes into the mind of panderer.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-25534701705140721382010-11-24T18:29:20.635-08:002010-11-24T18:29:20.635-08:00Oh, I am feeling that one. Amazing and excellent. ...Oh, I am feeling that one. Amazing and excellent. That last line has me feeling like I am walking through sheets of cold wind.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-47493116710490280032010-11-24T12:32:07.860-08:002010-11-24T12:32:07.860-08:00perfectperfectMichael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-37849198642566367622010-11-24T11:30:49.129-08:002010-11-24T11:30:49.129-08:00Ah, people being consumed by life. So terrible and...Ah, people being consumed by life. So terrible and yet so alluring...<br /><br />Well done!asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-77891131255222186242010-11-24T11:00:10.823-08:002010-11-24T11:00:10.823-08:00shuffling through sheets of dark past..sounds intr...shuffling through sheets of dark past..sounds intriguing - a beautiful imageryClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-55068214439963227932010-11-24T10:42:00.710-08:002010-11-24T10:42:00.710-08:00Ooh, I echo jaerose here: that turn of phrase is s...Ooh, I echo jaerose here: that turn of phrase is stunning imagery. Thank you!R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-77297943936578529622010-11-24T07:40:17.030-08:002010-11-24T07:40:17.030-08:00'shuffling through sheets of dark past' - ...'shuffling through sheets of dark past' - what a fantastic image..and one we must all do..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com