tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post3268689214634465200..comments2024-03-18T00:03:40.639-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Dark Alleys Won't Scare..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-3884278818954469622012-05-06T02:49:50.413-07:002012-05-06T02:49:50.413-07:00Dark haiku indeed, but truly wonderful!Dark haiku indeed, but truly wonderful!Marithttp://www.maritspaperworld.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43368690127600923782012-05-05T09:29:06.079-07:002012-05-05T09:29:06.079-07:00Sad and beautiful at the same time.Sad and beautiful at the same time.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04020912478886423923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10214270224128610042012-05-04T17:15:23.825-07:002012-05-04T17:15:23.825-07:00Dont we all have the fake smile at times?! Beautif...Dont we all have the fake smile at times?! Beautifully written!Fallingladieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14010949984698699058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-34787357992696347842012-05-04T16:57:42.874-07:002012-05-04T16:57:42.874-07:00achingly dark, yet so well written.. it has beauty...achingly dark, yet so well written.. it has beauty..Lenorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05523570885159399658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-42755109437373404512012-05-04T16:36:23.626-07:002012-05-04T16:36:23.626-07:00I guess you do what you have to do for the childre...I guess you do what you have to do for the children... Nicely written.Libbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14864587350512328594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52994924469714995442012-05-04T13:12:09.146-07:002012-05-04T13:12:09.146-07:00such sadness...the world is filled with it.such sadness...the world is filled with it.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-14914836188975840882012-05-04T13:05:40.528-07:002012-05-04T13:05:40.528-07:00A story in haiku. Nice one.A story in haiku. Nice one.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-4268994392855180782012-05-04T11:32:08.334-07:002012-05-04T11:32:08.334-07:00A beautiful touching short story....
Took my brea...A beautiful touching short story....<br /><br />Took my breath away...<br /><br />Covering her soul she steps in.....and no darkness can touch the soul.. the luminiscent soul..Rashmirekha Mannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426390919773928469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-18362157434649681962012-05-04T08:34:13.798-07:002012-05-04T08:34:13.798-07:00gone is the fear ~ you are moving on ~ lovely haik...gone is the fear ~ you are moving on ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-65023882713287024962012-05-04T06:40:29.509-07:002012-05-04T06:40:29.509-07:00not even your precious moon appeared to lighten yo...not even your precious moon appeared to lighten your haiku, but your love within remains loyal and present ready to rise.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-47932846149803080812012-05-04T03:58:32.631-07:002012-05-04T03:58:32.631-07:00Interesting little tale . . .Interesting little tale . . .Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-82278044307183545432012-05-04T03:44:58.045-07:002012-05-04T03:44:58.045-07:00The waiting would be the hardest part, I think...
...The waiting would be the hardest part, I think...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/05/04/raven-has-one-wish/" rel="nofollow">Raven Has One Wish</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.com