tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post4319878752960817494..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Tranquility of the Mind Too Deserves a ChanceRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-20328502928928304472010-11-11T22:00:47.326-08:002010-11-11T22:00:47.326-08:00I loved reading it and enjoyed every word!! Couldn...I loved reading it and enjoyed every word!! Couldn't say more!! Beautiful!!! :)Lalita Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09688302536340138757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75532942691848765692010-11-11T09:59:19.062-08:002010-11-11T09:59:19.062-08:00its just beautiful...reading it in itself brings p...its just beautiful...reading it in itself brings peace...Tweetyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15370849911077398353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-28305932427860748172010-11-11T08:37:48.407-08:002010-11-11T08:37:48.407-08:00Thanks a ton for the lovely submission..
Happy Thu...Thanks a ton for the lovely submission..<br />Happy Thursday.<br /><br />Cheers.<br />xxx<br /><br />claim awards in my second entry.<br />xxLinda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-15289136404828869302010-11-11T06:34:18.278-08:002010-11-11T06:34:18.278-08:00Good writing!
electronically yoursGood writing!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/11/electronically-yours.html" rel="nofollow">electronically yours</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-40110605990744934352010-11-11T06:16:41.080-08:002010-11-11T06:16:41.080-08:00Very good use of the prompts...I love it :)Very good use of the prompts...I love it :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-47407989808119810872010-11-11T02:02:01.404-08:002010-11-11T02:02:01.404-08:00Lovely poem ! Just loved the flow of emotions and ...Lovely poem ! Just loved the flow of emotions and thoughts blended with words ! And the mind getting attention : <br />But then tranquility<br />Of the mind too<br />Deserves a chance<br /><br />made me smile and nod my head in agreement ! this is the first time I came across the ever controversial mind , getting attention !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-3210732996277486512010-11-10T23:16:43.684-08:002010-11-10T23:16:43.684-08:00I loved the way the poem ended on the note of '...I loved the way the poem ended on the note of 'perhaps' :)<br /><br />And I am mulling over these lines :<br />It’s the restlessness of<br />An enquiring mind<br />That gives birth to Poems<br /><br />Good one :)Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07013993041882385722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10889253451222115262010-11-10T22:42:39.479-08:002010-11-10T22:42:39.479-08:00"Treasures of wonderful
Memories from
A tranq..."Treasures of wonderful<br />Memories from<br />A tranquil past"<br /><br />so neat and very meaningful verses...<br /><br />I wish all of my past could a be wonderful treasure, as tranquil and beautiful! <br /><br />Another superb poem Ramesh...:-)Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-76602584128370424932010-11-10T21:33:18.479-08:002010-11-10T21:33:18.479-08:00The opening lines were awesome.
Patience is a virt...The opening lines were awesome.<br />Patience is a virtue.<br />Loved the whole poem.<br />While reading this poem I felt as if to sit with you and discuss the poems written line by line over a cup of tea:)<br /><br />~Harshamaglomaniachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11960445338745677162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-3969957636896804442010-11-10T21:02:46.182-08:002010-11-10T21:02:46.182-08:00perhaps...It felt like I was at a vacation under a...perhaps...It felt like I was at a vacation under a sunlight mountain.<br /><br />It was a soothing experience reading this poem. Thank You!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75010080209355570522010-11-10T17:50:13.052-08:002010-11-10T17:50:13.052-08:00Lovely poem. I liked how it read so smoothly yet s...Lovely poem. I liked how it read so smoothly yet seemed to be a struggle to find peace. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-91271277088443228212010-11-10T16:03:17.742-08:002010-11-10T16:03:17.742-08:00Well,said.Sometimes one need to be quiet to find t...Well,said.Sometimes one need to be quiet to find the right words.<br /><br />They say one's work reflects the writer.Reading your work gave an impression of a very peaceful man.Only one who has known peace and tranquility can write about them.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing,Ramesh!June_Butterflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400867257051822555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-60690892046784115932010-11-10T15:23:30.148-08:002010-11-10T15:23:30.148-08:00Well, Rameshji, that calm and serenity of mind sur...Well, Rameshji, that calm and serenity of mind sure did you good <b><i>immediately</i></b>. :)<br /><br />Yes, when one comes to peace with one's own vacillating mind, things start appear stabler and better really... <br /><br />Interestingly, beautiful poetry usually comes from either extremely disturbed minds or from minds at peace! Well, strange are the ways.. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-88660757073769006332010-11-10T13:10:31.440-08:002010-11-10T13:10:31.440-08:00You certainly express your self-examinations in an...You certainly express your self-examinations in an interesting fashion, Ramesh!<br /><br />A wise man once wrote...<br /><br />"Only in silence is true appreciation found."<br /><br />(Well, I don't know how 'wise' he really is... it was ME! LOL!)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-3728506858965088172010-11-10T10:58:05.489-08:002010-11-10T10:58:05.489-08:00This certainly is a poem about the journey of crea...This certainly is a poem about the journey of creation, and you've captured all of the emotions.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-58522975956770373422010-11-10T10:38:26.496-08:002010-11-10T10:38:26.496-08:00awesome job.
xx
Thanks for the lovely support.
Hap...awesome job.<br />xx<br />Thanks for the lovely support.<br />Happy Wednesday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-39748739971317186182010-11-10T10:38:13.230-08:002010-11-10T10:38:13.230-08:00tranquility was my keyword in your poem...i always...tranquility was my keyword in your poem...i always want things to happen immediately as well...train myself heavily to be more patient...not always successful...<br />nice an thought provoking write RameshClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-80580657889831296612010-11-10T09:35:52.931-08:002010-11-10T09:35:52.931-08:00"the treasure house of my memories" is b..."the treasure house of my memories" is beautiful! And this part:<br /><br /><i>I knew,<br />I would have to<br />Be quieter in the NOW<br />It is true that<br />It’s the restlessness of<br />An enquiring mind<br />That gives birth to Poems</i><br /><br />This has always been the dilemma, at least for me. It's that restlessness that produces the work, but it doesn't make for a peaceful heart or mind -- or does it? I continue to explore this concept. Thank you for some thought-provoking work today.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-89481475980835897032010-11-10T08:06:59.795-08:002010-11-10T08:06:59.795-08:00Perhaps...
I like it..
:)Perhaps...<br />I like it.. <br />:)Isha Etherahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13078149456154457103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52489110200730891352010-11-10T07:36:56.520-08:002010-11-10T07:36:56.520-08:00Being still is an art but I wonder if it is acheiv...Being still is an art but I wonder if it is acheivable so long as we think (and write things down)..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com