tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post7873325492164363217..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Winds Hiss In Dark, East Glows Like GoldRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-18468272596339744822010-10-19T03:06:13.995-07:002010-10-19T03:06:13.995-07:00Loved reading all of them....nice picture presente...Loved reading all of them....nice picture presented by the haikus.. :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-78667275395081368232010-10-17T12:36:52.440-07:002010-10-17T12:36:52.440-07:00yeah what noelle sed so perfectly...!!!yeah what noelle sed so perfectly...!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23491077595016778302010-10-17T04:32:30.230-07:002010-10-17T04:32:30.230-07:00I never thought of the wind as hissing, R'ji :...I never thought of the wind as hissing, R'ji :) interesting take that one! :D<br /><br />UR a Haikuddict now eh? ;)Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-29178357430171469422010-10-16T22:14:23.474-07:002010-10-16T22:14:23.474-07:00Lovely Haiku's.. Loved it..
--Someone Is Spec...Lovely Haiku's.. Loved it..<br /><br />--Someone Is Special--Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43574253563064390092010-10-15T23:38:17.991-07:002010-10-15T23:38:17.991-07:00I love your use of onomatopoeia in "doorbell ...I love your use of onomatopoeia in "doorbell crackles", "winds hiss" and "glows like gold". I also like the fact that you anthropomorphize the moon, earth, stars and even the trees. It seems a kind of fable really, as if all of nature were taking on human qualities that were better left to us. The natural world has its cycles and these are little affected by feelings of jealousy, judgment or forgiveness, but it is fascinating to make them so. It is like living in the World of Greek myth when gods and goddesses of moon and stars became angry and manifested it. Great job with words here!<br />NoelleNoelle Clearwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15879264907115107737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-46973099688526414112010-10-15T08:04:01.110-07:002010-10-15T08:04:01.110-07:00No image needed,
all vision evoked by words.
Thank...No image needed,<br />all vision evoked by words.<br />Thank you Ramesh Sood.foxysuehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04620248626509576905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-39562266100177883252010-10-15T07:41:41.003-07:002010-10-15T07:41:41.003-07:00wow, you are having a wonderful time with words to...wow, you are having a wonderful time with words today ! Love the images from the second and third and the anticipation in the mundane in the first !<br />Happy Friday !Kim Mailhothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13849980369873306402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-74347227257287321942010-10-15T07:39:10.793-07:002010-10-15T07:39:10.793-07:00Wonderful word weaving, especially when some of th...Wonderful word weaving, especially when some of them are challenging to use together.Merihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07024443046207501650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-40468513822401989002010-10-15T06:13:15.908-07:002010-10-15T06:13:15.908-07:00ha i especially like the last two...very nicely pl...ha i especially like the last two...very nicely played...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-2039396736614704042010-10-15T05:45:54.479-07:002010-10-15T05:45:54.479-07:00Great work Ramesh Soodji!! I loved the 2nd and 3rd...Great work Ramesh Soodji!! I loved the 2nd and 3rd Haiku's :) <br /><br />Winds hiss in the dark and the swaying leaves do seem to ridicule and yet give absolution. <br /><br />The twinkling stars and the tired setting moon create a picture to await for the new dawn :) <br /><br />Best wishes!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-63436203948044808372010-10-15T02:59:22.003-07:002010-10-15T02:59:22.003-07:00That first one that mentions the doorbell, made me...That first one that mentions the doorbell, made me shudder a bit. I envisioned a surprise ring, late at night, when everyone knows I'm sleeping. Almost scaring me as I read it. That's something, how words can bring totally different thoughts to each individual that reads it. Personal thoughts and images. Awesome.<br />The next is beautiful, and as I relate much of my existance to the heavens, I can see that Grandmother Moon setting, or rather melting, into the sky as morning begins again.<br />Great stuff here. I notice you do it without photos and that is good.<br /><br />Peace.Spadomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17781369901345409341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-42258521377649830242010-10-15T02:04:55.825-07:002010-10-15T02:04:55.825-07:00“Hopefully its hope”…. I certainly hope so….
I lo...“Hopefully its hope”…. I certainly hope so….<br />I love your clever use of words.<br /><br />Have a nice day, BoonieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-76404896495058471762010-10-14T12:33:44.170-07:002010-10-14T12:33:44.170-07:00wow...what a beautiful picture being drawn...i am ...wow...what a beautiful picture being drawn...i am in love with your haiku's ramesh ji :)Tweetyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15370849911077398353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-44481097362856894902010-10-14T09:25:08.641-07:002010-10-14T09:25:08.641-07:00Beautiful. Love and Light, SenderBeautiful. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-47531294261093805952010-10-14T02:47:16.859-07:002010-10-14T02:47:16.859-07:00Wonderful composition :)Wonderful composition :)Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-1387969705371259622010-10-13T20:45:11.457-07:002010-10-13T20:45:11.457-07:00Pyaara Dost,
A lovely morning from Thrissur!I am ...Pyaara Dost,<br /> A lovely morning from Thrissur!I am with Amma now.<br />I must learn how to convey strong messages through few words.Hats off to you!:)<br />Hope my comment will be visible this time.The pc is different and the location is different.:)<br />Trust me,dost,I do read your posts regularly.<br />Today evening onwards Pooja starts for Devi;so no reading or writing.<br />HAPPY VIJAYA DASHAMI!<br />MayGodddess Saraswathi Bless You to write more and more posts!<br />Wishing you a wonderful weekend,<br /> Sasneham,<br /> Anuanupamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13377958701532875004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-65027546583003120422010-10-13T20:32:37.424-07:002010-10-13T20:32:37.424-07:00"Trees ridicule yet absolve"...
Wow."Trees ridicule yet absolve"...<br />Wow.Lost in thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09177323757059035525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-9979135261004046682010-10-13T13:44:51.668-07:002010-10-13T13:44:51.668-07:00both are excellent in form, but I, too, like the f...both are excellent in form, but I, too, like the first one for its images.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-84688518049946718282010-10-13T07:03:58.515-07:002010-10-13T07:03:58.515-07:00I especially loved the imagery of the first one. S...I especially loved the imagery of the first one. So few words, such beautiful vision.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-57773508638628453052010-10-13T06:17:05.403-07:002010-10-13T06:17:05.403-07:00Hissing winds, judgemental trees, missing moon - l...Hissing winds, judgemental trees, missing moon - loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com