tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post8576182979341571619..comments2024-03-18T00:03:40.639-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Slice Me Deep.....Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23190474218748538232012-09-30T12:47:17.110-07:002012-09-30T12:47:17.110-07:00This journey-in-haiku is a classic. Sheer brillian...This journey-in-haiku is a classic. Sheer brilliance!<br /><br />(may I suggest that it wouldn't hurt to change 'hurts' into hurt - although it appears to be singular, this can have a plural connotation, though I'm sure there are people out there better qualified to explain it than me!)<br /><br />best wishesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-7225960193081857272012-05-31T00:01:42.819-07:002012-05-31T00:01:42.819-07:00I second Becca..this is simply OMG!! one can learn...I second Becca..this is simply OMG!! one can learn the technique n the form but the thought process is sheer ingenuity..u continue to amaze us, haiku after haiku :)Sanjana https://www.blogger.com/profile/02279875092908420073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-69276338283194778892012-02-09T23:50:04.638-08:002012-02-09T23:50:04.638-08:00OMG - Ramesh -- this is awesome ... very layered w...OMG - Ramesh -- this is awesome ... very layered with depth!! The journey within and to the depths is incredible to discover the wealth your true self contains. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend ~~ beccabecca givenshttp://beccagivens.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-53793461556741629592011-04-27T01:20:55.884-07:002011-04-27T01:20:55.884-07:00Oh what would I not give to meet a calmer me... or...Oh what would I not give to meet a calmer me... or at least to meet the old me<br /><br /><br />RegardsRashmirekha Mannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02426390919773928469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-12520121625206069282011-01-02T17:16:08.520-08:002011-01-02T17:16:08.520-08:00I love writing longe haikus as well. This was per...I love writing longe haikus as well. This was perfect and the last stanza was so true- nicely done!!!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-48087974984292449602010-12-24T09:25:27.717-08:002010-12-24T09:25:27.717-08:00great combo....super poem and duper haiku!great combo....super poem and duper haiku!Premahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06466190120935075604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43722321342718297232010-12-23T05:52:32.546-08:002010-12-23T05:52:32.546-08:00what a loop poetry and haiku!.
you are truly impre...what a loop poetry and haiku!.<br />you are truly impressiveUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10492892942399270242010-12-22T22:28:43.136-08:002010-12-22T22:28:43.136-08:00Ramesh, the words take you deep down where we even...Ramesh, the words take you deep down where we eventually must reflect and feel about but invariably don't...<br /><br />Nice!Shail Raghuvanshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484123238045040778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-87252671953213903162010-12-22T09:50:57.092-08:002010-12-22T09:50:57.092-08:00Wonderful Compilation Rameshji.. I loved it..
--...Wonderful Compilation Rameshji.. I loved it..<br /><br />--Someone is Special--Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-9694257649720775532010-12-22T03:51:16.287-08:002010-12-22T03:51:16.287-08:00Oh that was lovely , exactly the way I felt some t...Oh that was lovely , exactly the way I felt some time back :) And your use of words are so simple yet so effective ! :) Loved it , as every next lines hop to, one continues to nod heir head in agreement !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43239201790860910992010-12-21T11:21:11.724-08:002010-12-21T11:21:11.724-08:00Deep, provocative words Ramesh...
http://mypoetic...Deep, provocative words Ramesh...<br /><br />http://mypoeticpath.wordpress.com/2010/12/21/the-miracle-of-the-season/Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-16343492356076319492010-12-21T11:05:14.369-08:002010-12-21T11:05:14.369-08:00Such a creative way of expressing the peacefulness...Such a creative way of expressing the peacefulness of home!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10000635570087381802010-12-21T01:02:54.218-08:002010-12-21T01:02:54.218-08:00Rameshji, I am glad too that you stopped by and I ...Rameshji, I am glad too that you stopped by and I could come here and read your work. I loved the lines and somehow because really know where you coming from so could empathisebudh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61900779118884884892010-12-21T00:31:30.696-08:002010-12-21T00:31:30.696-08:00Fascinating poem. The repetition of "slice me...Fascinating poem. The repetition of "slice me deep' is a wonderful expression of the depth of longing. Great poem, very enjoyable read, even considering the dark theme. Take care and hope all is well. Thanks for visiting my site, I will have to read through some of your poetry. Take care and hope all is well,<br /><br />crb.Caribbean Foolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211032750843178534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-42862373710256104672010-12-21T00:01:42.369-08:002010-12-21T00:01:42.369-08:00Awesome poetry I must say. The best part is how su...Awesome poetry I must say. The best part is how succinctly you can express so many feelings in 4 lines. So beautiful, yet so touching.Nidhi..https://www.blogger.com/profile/00923712168904599714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10869878738289392082010-12-20T22:10:38.918-08:002010-12-20T22:10:38.918-08:00Beautiful poem...
Stillness of lake hugging the c...Beautiful poem...<br /> Stillness of lake hugging the calmer self...wonderfulRashmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294504967496661652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-66079613410853494132010-12-20T12:43:21.458-08:002010-12-20T12:43:21.458-08:00Wonderful waves of stillness reaching.Wonderful waves of stillness reaching.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-84656138880380148662010-12-20T10:28:02.013-08:002010-12-20T10:28:02.013-08:00I think we all long for a 'calmer' Self......I think we all long for a 'calmer' Self... I know there are many times when I need to 'meet a calmer me on the edge of the lake.' Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-22421473601487527232010-12-20T10:06:27.276-08:002010-12-20T10:06:27.276-08:00a calmer me....beautifula calmer me....beautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-31433014917375596792010-12-20T07:24:15.203-08:002010-12-20T07:24:15.203-08:00Thank you friends.. all of you..for emboldening me...Thank you friends.. all of you..for emboldening me..and Jingle, your presence itself is an award for me..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43077200428147679322010-12-20T00:10:13.718-08:002010-12-20T00:10:13.718-08:00and no matter how it is being classified, i still ...and no matter how it is being classified, i still think the words are great and beautifully said. brought out the emotions well. great achievement ramesh! mine's here-Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-6826904673412225602010-12-19T21:46:51.632-08:002010-12-19T21:46:51.632-08:00oh, my goodness! you brought me there with your be...oh, my goodness! you brought me there with your beautifully written words. home!<br />felt it deeply!<br /><br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-56451912228193788132010-12-19T15:44:39.722-08:002010-12-19T15:44:39.722-08:00It certainly demands a great mind to be able to th...It certainly demands a great mind to be able to think these pictures. Impressed !<br /><br />Please have a good new week.<br /><br /><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-51290481203716304112010-12-19T14:13:04.608-08:002010-12-19T14:13:04.608-08:00Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy! ...Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy! <br /><br /><a href="http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/12/i-was-pleased-2-beat-flu-december.html" rel="nofollow">End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community</a><br /><br /><br />Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !<br />Hope to see you at our Sunday Poetry Potluck tonight, let me know if you have questions. old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome..<br />Week 15 theme: reflections, interpretations, and musings.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-81426176245117377962010-12-19T14:12:52.331-08:002010-12-19T14:12:52.331-08:00cut your inner being through sharp words...
wow, ...cut your inner being through sharp words...<br /><br />wow, love the line.<br />well done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com