Thursday, May 27, 2010

Thoughts as they came..( OSI Prompt floating III)


Oblivious Mind

Glorious morning Sun,
Floating clouds & singing birds
Fragrant breeze ,
flowers dancing,
Yet oblivious mind ,
Gets stuck in yesterday’s turmoil.


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Mystery

Will they melt & rain
Where Earth’s in pain

Or choose to become rough
Where water is enough

Or simply stray
And just fade away

Yes, mystery shrouds
These floating clouds….



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6 comments:

  1. Harshad MehtaMay 27, 2010 at 10:05 AM

    I loved last one.

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  2. Ramesh SoodMay 27, 2010 at 10:20 AM

    Thanks Harshadji, for always being there.. it helps and emboldens..

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  3. UnknownMay 27, 2010 at 10:52 AM

    fantastic sir, keep doing-manoj vishwakarma

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  4. BeyondMay 27, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    It is perfectly said for the oblivious mind.

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  5. M. RekaMay 28, 2010 at 1:43 PM

    Lovely thoughts, worth admiring :)
    Short Poems

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  6. Mahesh Aadhya KalalMay 29, 2010 at 9:31 AM

    it reminds me the famous "Kaale megha, kaale mehga" from lagaan who holds the soul of indian farmers...
    well crafted post and apt one for floating, ahead of monsoons.

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