tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post1165087447880046892..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Dreams Don't Bother About StatusRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-66781134995550302162011-01-11T06:04:42.301-08:002011-01-11T06:04:42.301-08:00I was completely lost in the dream myself until i ...I was completely lost in the dream myself until i reached the closing lines . so touching .. what a cruel joke ! sigh ! amazing write .. Thanks for linking this on ym page to check !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-39064232247113735052010-10-27T02:31:17.050-07:002010-10-27T02:31:17.050-07:00Rameshji,
This is mind blowing..!!
Love, dreams, i...Rameshji,<br />This is mind blowing..!!<br />Love, dreams, illusions, loss, death.. so many dimensions the reader is made to travel though..<br /><br />very well written- like a complete story- words weaving tale beyond the "written" words..<br /><br />Loads of wishes- :)Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-28214711830796843492010-10-25T20:03:24.797-07:002010-10-25T20:03:24.797-07:00the flow of the poem is truly marvelous =D wonderf...the flow of the poem is truly marvelous =D wonderfully written!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-91913718537688205002010-10-25T14:23:32.295-07:002010-10-25T14:23:32.295-07:00Love the sentiment and message in this!! Well pen...Love the sentiment and message in this!! Well penned xoxChronicles in Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871010749205119404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-82699738014617490042010-09-18T04:58:12.784-07:002010-09-18T04:58:12.784-07:00In general I like happier endings, but here, the s...In general I like happier endings, but here, the sad one fits in better. Lovely poem, lovely message.<br />You used the three prompt words very well.Aayushi Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08360324719537614250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-28804274015796243442010-09-10T23:23:32.750-07:002010-09-10T23:23:32.750-07:00Thanks a lot every one here to visit and grace the...Thanks a lot every one here to visit and grace the post with your comments..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-13418517549820188682010-09-10T11:37:35.176-07:002010-09-10T11:37:35.176-07:00Happier endings look good..Lovely poemHappier endings look good..Lovely poemJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-1811367953690520242010-09-10T04:54:06.538-07:002010-09-10T04:54:06.538-07:00Dreams are what keep us going..
commas in the pau...Dreams are what keep us going..<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/commas-in-pauses.html" rel="nofollow">commas in the pauses</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23103569113687615222010-09-08T20:24:53.629-07:002010-09-08T20:24:53.629-07:00The soul lies there when dreams wants to be nurtur...The soul lies there when dreams wants to be nurtured into reality and I truly believe in the happy ending coz if you gotta dream you gotta protect it, nurture it.<br />This surely is a finest poem I have ever read about dreams and yes why should a dream care about status, it's purpose is to achieve it.<br />Applauds....Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13473845080606323827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52630429866349941722010-09-08T19:43:48.202-07:002010-09-08T19:43:48.202-07:00It transported me to a place unknown where one can...It transported me to a place unknown where one can be somebody but could only realize it later, it was never a reality!<br /><br />The ending is just sad!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-4990666222762213082010-09-08T18:57:39.336-07:002010-09-08T18:57:39.336-07:00@Raji..
What Swapnap has said.. a twist of fate....@Raji.. <br /><br />What Swapnap has said.. a twist of fate.. a promise to his departing soul... Read it once more Raji, and you will get it..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61015753851848130902010-09-08T18:02:43.803-07:002010-09-08T18:02:43.803-07:00i see the twist of fate as his eyes were closed by...i see the twist of fate as his eyes were closed by strangers hand!!Nice portrayal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-59020243632258597942010-09-08T14:31:35.670-07:002010-09-08T14:31:35.670-07:00there is much richness in these lines.there is much richness in these lines.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52023583954720012452010-09-08T13:14:48.315-07:002010-09-08T13:14:48.315-07:00sir i couldnt grasp the last line.. can u explain ...sir i couldnt grasp the last line.. can u explain me,..?rajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18095103429113436115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-19111727170668885792010-09-08T08:20:47.367-07:002010-09-08T08:20:47.367-07:00Like you I have a hard time relating to your subje...Like you I have a hard time relating to your subject matter. I'm not much for poetry or pros but I can recognise interesting imagery when I read it . Very nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05850207517680847619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-89384200007362461622010-09-08T08:10:04.126-07:002010-09-08T08:10:04.126-07:00Thank you for stopping by at my Place by the Fire;...Thank you for stopping by at my Place by the Fire; I hope you enjoyed my stories. I love the title of this piece especially!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com