tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post2388123966783999173..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Flaw & Crater.. for HH and OSI and for JPPRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61281111137267717042011-07-07T06:22:44.398-07:002011-07-07T06:22:44.398-07:00Your poems, as always, are wonderful! I really li...Your poems, as always, are wonderful! I really likes what you did with the crater prompt- the last line was perfect!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-51463997947486093612011-07-06T17:44:18.494-07:002011-07-06T17:44:18.494-07:00really wonderful writing! thank you for visiting m...really wonderful writing! thank you for visiting my blog. i will be back to yours often.<br />daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-48022228136042905222011-07-06T10:21:28.351-07:002011-07-06T10:21:28.351-07:00you certainly have a great handle on all types of ...you certainly have a great handle on all types of poems. wish i could write as you do. wonderful poems!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-13070817386136769432011-07-06T04:22:05.096-07:002011-07-06T04:22:05.096-07:00Beautiful poem nd haiku :)Beautiful poem nd haiku :)Defianthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15465203377322791514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-46863651734382546532011-07-06T00:30:55.980-07:002011-07-06T00:30:55.980-07:00"I have been seeing myself
Based on what I t..."I have been seeing myself<br />Based on what I think<br />But people see me<br />Based on what I do" This was a very enlightening line for I do the same. Such a sad poem in the final, losing friends is devastatingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-54415881933830240552011-07-05T17:11:03.880-07:002011-07-05T17:11:03.880-07:00Hi Ramesh,
Your words flow on the healing path. I ...Hi Ramesh,<br />Your words flow on the healing path. I too am on that path but for myself. I lost me. And now my ego mind has been laid to rest and I love the new me of living from my spirit. It has opened my eyes to the truth. Like buda I meditate every day now. And I believe your sisters spirit is still with you. She may be your guardian angel now. I send you a BIG HUG and lots of healing energy. Thank you for stopping by. I so enjoy hearing from you. As you are truly a kind and wonderful spirit.Grammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13278964537964027566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-15111246561918061432011-07-05T07:53:27.873-07:002011-07-05T07:53:27.873-07:00Loved your OSI... The phrase 'Craters of doubt...Loved your OSI... The phrase 'Craters of doubt' seemed to strike a chord with me.<br /><br />Great work!!! xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16911834160047529790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-79484967927058808002011-07-04T15:32:07.727-07:002011-07-04T15:32:07.727-07:00I love where you took the crater prompt; very uniq...I love where you took the crater prompt; very unique.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-27132391208746953032011-07-04T11:12:13.290-07:002011-07-04T11:12:13.290-07:00Awesome work my friend. I loved all of them. Well ...Awesome work my friend. I loved all of them. Well done.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-69132121228403182972011-07-04T08:43:15.966-07:002011-07-04T08:43:15.966-07:00Thank you Harshadji... what you say is true.. I ap...Thank you Harshadji... what you say is true.. I appear to have experienced all these during my journey till today.. and each experience gives a new learning..and that's what makes it tempting for me to share...with discerning minds like you and others in this space..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-36981385201191258262011-07-04T08:43:09.779-07:002011-07-04T08:43:09.779-07:00love your Haiku, the imperfect is perfect.
crater...love your Haiku, the imperfect is perfect.<br /><br />craters of doubt kill.<br />powerful expression.<br />keep it up.<br /><br />share with jingle poetry potluck today.Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-55219815012859322322011-07-03T01:57:16.246-07:002011-07-03T01:57:16.246-07:00I love haiku. Superb. It is so easy for someone to...I love haiku. Superb. It is so easy for someone to wipe out what takes dedication. Be it painting, trust or carefully built business.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.com