tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post353436542028163998..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: There will be a new sunrise..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-13326643922404507412011-07-20T16:12:12.346-07:002011-07-20T16:12:12.346-07:00a wonderful expression of phantom... funny how a p...a wonderful expression of phantom... funny how a phantom suddenly appears out of nowhere and takes up residence and we so willing... we never really know when it comes or the moment it departs... a presence indeed!miss piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/07/19/osi-phantom/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-30857424886730932272011-07-20T04:09:37.083-07:002011-07-20T04:09:37.083-07:00I enjoyed both your works immensely but the haiku ...I enjoyed both your works immensely but the haiku is brilliant! Envy does make life so much more complicated and it is based on things that are not at all worthwhile. So many people waste living their own lives to the fullest because they are too busy being envious of someone else...eAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-6420399135077818052011-07-19T18:42:30.246-07:002011-07-19T18:42:30.246-07:00love your haiku, so very true those words arelove your haiku, so very true those words areChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-73114007097465608622011-07-19T09:13:27.728-07:002011-07-19T09:13:27.728-07:00You have such wonderful thoughts and words weaved ...You have such wonderful thoughts and words weaved in both your Haiku and free verse RS!! <br />As always it is a pleasure to read you and enjoy the simplicity and ease with which you tie up the knots!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-20325797069551285662011-07-19T06:23:24.860-07:002011-07-19T06:23:24.860-07:00very beautiful and inspiring Rameshji..
Someone i...very beautiful and inspiring Rameshji..<br /><br />Someone is SpecialSomeone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10969912818126480812011-07-18T21:00:10.759-07:002011-07-18T21:00:10.759-07:00Such power in both pieces...
I especially loved th...Such power in both pieces...<br />I especially loved the haiku.Mariela Ochoahttp://www.marielaochoa.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75104627017859202692011-07-18T20:23:04.321-07:002011-07-18T20:23:04.321-07:00Happy Potluck.
Thanks for the visit to my blog.
...Happy Potluck.<br /><br />Thanks for the visit to my blog.<br /><br />rocking compositions.Jinglehttp://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75383132023527092822011-07-18T20:17:05.140-07:002011-07-18T20:17:05.140-07:00Indeed, the sunrise comes. May we laugh with humb...Indeed, the sunrise comes. May we laugh with humble joy when it does!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-34449846133943447052011-07-18T18:23:15.187-07:002011-07-18T18:23:15.187-07:00Your poems are so inspiring. I love the new sunris...Your poems are so inspiring. I love the new sunrise. Lovely.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-39400668180456060352011-07-18T14:16:38.806-07:002011-07-18T14:16:38.806-07:00"There will be a new sunrise.."
i just ..."There will be a new sunrise.."<br /><br />i just wrote a very short verse "each day" which says each day is a new beginning. i LOVE your free verse and haiku.<br /><br />thank you for visiting my blog and your kind comment.<br />daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-2180435873101674772011-07-18T13:20:17.707-07:002011-07-18T13:20:17.707-07:00you brought this one home with the opening of the ...you brought this one home with the opening of the eyes near the end. I often wonder about what does and doesn't matter. Nicely done!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/07/18/where-no-one-lives-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-55432995885173164362011-07-18T12:55:23.463-07:002011-07-18T12:55:23.463-07:00know the feeling wellknow the feeling wellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-74173626664768875012011-07-18T08:04:48.268-07:002011-07-18T08:04:48.268-07:00Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through...Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75597637901991109522011-07-18T07:38:06.547-07:002011-07-18T07:38:06.547-07:00Again Ramesh, I really like the haiku. You boldly ...Again Ramesh, I really like the haiku. You boldly use the limitations of the form to your advantage.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-66170156138771295692011-07-18T06:21:28.162-07:002011-07-18T06:21:28.162-07:00I love that haiku, powerful and excellent poem I a...I love that haiku, powerful and excellent poem I agree with Leo I like the progression of the piece. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-91438754999396601612011-07-17T17:43:21.534-07:002011-07-17T17:43:21.534-07:00Envy can be a destroyer ...Envy can be a destroyer ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-14463224475803594322011-07-17T17:24:00.243-07:002011-07-17T17:24:00.243-07:00join us tonight,
we do love your presence very mu...join us tonight,<br /><br />we do love your presence very much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-27646015937232352852011-07-17T17:23:35.125-07:002011-07-17T17:23:35.125-07:00love the line about strings of doubt.
beautiful t...love the line about strings of doubt.<br /><br />beautiful talent on the theme.Jinglehttp://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-48983270323971766552011-07-17T06:07:46.624-07:002011-07-17T06:07:46.624-07:00Envy! Loved the way you put it in haiku.
I am sur...Envy! Loved the way you put it in haiku.<br /> I am surely learning from the other posts.Live2cherishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15826618983723239092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-50382096270480746172011-07-16T23:08:32.642-07:002011-07-16T23:08:32.642-07:00Envy does seem to have that effect, Rameshji. I of...Envy does seem to have that effect, Rameshji. I often wonder why that is. Nice internal rhyme of sorts, in the last line of the haiku too!<br /><br />And with your free verse, I just loved the way you got it from hard torturous night to a new beginning next day. The passage could be imagined nicely! :) Loved both.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.com