tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post4526011580228358688..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: HH : Appreciation, OSI : The PassingRamesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-18915965015665770002010-10-10T20:05:29.731-07:002010-10-10T20:05:29.731-07:00thanks for linking!
well plotted piece.thanks for linking!<br />well plotted piece.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-30192847834794251082010-09-18T10:25:22.858-07:002010-09-18T10:25:22.858-07:00I really enjoyed reading the your OSI Passing poem...I really enjoyed reading the your OSI Passing poem. As I read it I was thinking, now God has a plan for this. Is Remesh, i.e. the author, presupposing God? <br />You wonderfully wrote the answer to my question lingering in the background. YES.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-87413812139021631882010-09-16T05:47:02.482-07:002010-09-16T05:47:02.482-07:00"Stars sing lullabies" brilliant imagery..."Stars sing lullabies" brilliant imagery! And the last stanza of your poem is amazing...Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-84224424704468469932010-09-16T03:46:21.037-07:002010-09-16T03:46:21.037-07:00But more than that, I love the idea of stars singi...But more than that, I love the idea of stars singing lullabies, sun sleeps, moon smiles...:)<br /><br />you truly are so poetic! :)Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-12293714311087806622010-09-16T03:42:00.777-07:002010-09-16T03:42:00.777-07:00I am smiling...for trespassing God's space... ...I am smiling...for trespassing God's space... :)<br /><br />Beautiful poem as always Ramesh!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23357256452550903802010-09-15T12:45:19.542-07:002010-09-15T12:45:19.542-07:00Your 3WW link is bad. I took it down, but couldn&#...Your 3WW link is bad. I took it down, but couldn't find your contribution. MAke sure the link is correct and resubmit, please.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-44651080421221446572010-09-15T10:25:35.473-07:002010-09-15T10:25:35.473-07:00Beautiful Imagery created by the sun, moon and sta...Beautiful Imagery created by the sun, moon and stars in your lovely poem Rameshji.Rumyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17548105346820601110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-25357667691168705462010-09-15T10:23:42.865-07:002010-09-15T10:23:42.865-07:00Loved the Sun, Moon and stars serenading one anoth...Loved the Sun, Moon and stars serenading one another. Beautiful poem!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-77025836951716571112010-09-15T02:18:38.473-07:002010-09-15T02:18:38.473-07:00very smart.very smart.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-26719647654264256752010-09-14T23:09:43.985-07:002010-09-14T23:09:43.985-07:00the OSI poem is simply great...a lot of flow and r...the OSI poem is simply great...a lot of flow and rhythm...beautiful thoughts: aren't we all curious about the reaction to our death!<br />The last line...why punishment?Nalini Hebbarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15829943036546766563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-49865272372370351702010-09-14T19:49:24.627-07:002010-09-14T19:49:24.627-07:00I really enjoyed your haiku and your OSI poem as w...I really enjoyed your haiku and your OSI poem as well...nicely written here.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-28468583034228640972010-09-14T10:43:18.929-07:002010-09-14T10:43:18.929-07:00Liked icing on the cake.
Wonderful flow.Liked icing on the cake.<br /><br />Wonderful flow.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-77412664091622575962010-09-14T09:52:09.553-07:002010-09-14T09:52:09.553-07:00Good flow!
I watch while the mountains crumbleGood flow!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/i-watch-while-mountains-crumble.html" rel="nofollow">I watch while the mountains crumble</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-14345024166834022212010-09-14T09:51:56.077-07:002010-09-14T09:51:56.077-07:00Thanks a lot, friends for your emboldening feedbac...Thanks a lot, friends for your emboldening feedback..it spurs me on..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-44573481338904326062010-09-14T04:27:43.022-07:002010-09-14T04:27:43.022-07:00Love the idea of a personified moon in your haiku!...Love the idea of a personified moon in your haiku! And the second poem is a wonderful, reflective wondering on that inner voice that longs to leave a lingering mark of being!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-85137921652013262932010-09-13T13:18:58.019-07:002010-09-13T13:18:58.019-07:00a different but interesting approach to this...!a different but interesting approach to this...!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-64370254435688589692010-09-13T11:34:03.676-07:002010-09-13T11:34:03.676-07:00There is so much wisdom in your words. A wonderful...There is so much wisdom in your words. A wonderful approach to the prompt. We are all kings and queens in our own way, making our mark upon the lives and hearts of our families and even strangers. The last lines are marvelous though I think He understands that we are naturally inquisitive for He made us :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-80912042242072873512010-09-13T11:01:48.310-07:002010-09-13T11:01:48.310-07:00We all make our mark one way or another! Beautifu...We all make our mark one way or another! Beautiful take on "The Passing."JP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-5462972034226717392010-09-13T07:17:09.072-07:002010-09-13T07:17:09.072-07:00Pyaara Dost,
Good Evening!
When the stars ligh...Pyaara Dost,<br /> Good Evening!<br />When the stars light up the sky tonight,my face will shine due to your words of appreciation.Thank you so much for your encouraging words for my posts.I enjoy your sincerity and your presence make a lot of difference.:)<br /> God will bless you, dear!<br />Wishing you a beautiful and peaceful night,<br /> Sasneham,<br /> Anuanupamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13377958701532875004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-32509705789097909792010-09-13T05:22:48.549-07:002010-09-13T05:22:48.549-07:00but we have our family to share to the next genera...but we have our family to share to the next generation our lives :-) <br /><br />i love the haiku too.totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-80153231837105340762010-09-13T05:11:38.724-07:002010-09-13T05:11:38.724-07:00Stunning words! I especially loved these lines:
O...Stunning words! I especially loved these lines:<br /><br /><i>Or getting wings and soaring<br />In to the blue skies<br />And settling as one among<br />The fraternity of stars<br />Or simply vanishing like a vapor<br />To return as a raindrop<br />Carrying hope of becoming<br />A part of the vast deep ocean</i><br /><br />Thank you for sharing your beautiful words.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-44735113740045537432010-09-12T16:23:49.460-07:002010-09-12T16:23:49.460-07:00Loved the progress, and message you convey - and a...Loved the progress, and message you convey - and a beautiful message it is! The Passing, etched in stone, to be relived forever, or a flickering candle that extinguishes in a gust of wild, ruthless wind.. is the question you put up, a question that is the ultimate inspiration for so many - the blessed ones like King Arthur and his entourage, the credible knights, and the ordinary, and not-so-ordinary Us.. A wonderful take on the OSI prompt, this week.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-54681221893094169052010-09-12T14:52:11.587-07:002010-09-12T14:52:11.587-07:00Passing by eachother, day and night, getting close...Passing by eachother, day and night, getting close, yet too far from eachother ... a great Haiku about nature and its content. Please have a good Monday.<br /><br /><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-45628040250405988652010-09-12T11:11:10.621-07:002010-09-12T11:11:10.621-07:00Oh my God Sir.... This one is like... too beautif...Oh my God Sir.... This one is like... too beautiful... Some lines are seriously magical...<br /><br />Turning in to statues of ice, whom<br />No Sun will be able to melt...<br />And settling as one among<br />The fraternity of stars<br />Or simply vanishing like a vapor<br />To return as a raindrop<br />Carrying hope of becoming<br />A part of the vast deep ocean...<br /><br />Loved it.<br />God bless.<br /><br />And I do believe in You. The passing is indeed much more than what we think it is...Gazal Bharadwajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14633015155724517188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-23568161476194947452010-09-12T08:30:47.088-07:002010-09-12T08:30:47.088-07:00There's a lot of lovely imagery in this one. N...There's a lot of lovely imagery in this one. Nicely done!mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.com