tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post5557144119341956205..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Can't Let Love Erode..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-75325726584931416632011-09-14T10:06:57.968-07:002011-09-14T10:06:57.968-07:00Nice, with a startling end. I had to do kind of a...Nice, with a startling end. I had to do kind of a double take, and read it again, feeling that I had missed something, or that something was missing. It wasn't-- you've written it all in there.<br /><br />It was as if the last lines of the poem were speaking to me, "You only see-- she observes."<br /><br />Thank you for posting this poem. So crisp and succinct, and beautiful at the same time.Elaine Danforthhttp://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/the-blush-of-summer-dusk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-6718857658524180582011-09-12T20:43:54.094-07:002011-09-12T20:43:54.094-07:00sweet and encouraging words.
enjoyed it.sweet and encouraging words.<br />enjoyed it.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-6143127955404914602011-09-12T07:53:40.545-07:002011-09-12T07:53:40.545-07:00Wonderful! Love the form!
http://charleslmashburn....Wonderful! Love the form!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/11/farmers-lament-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-4167775470621509952011-09-11T05:14:38.631-07:002011-09-11T05:14:38.631-07:00Such a wonderful 'loop'... The poetry is m...Such a wonderful 'loop'... The poetry is marvelous too! I enjoyed visiting you today!Marithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10274311778326853533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-38129556594197215322011-09-09T08:39:17.597-07:002011-09-09T08:39:17.597-07:00my heart hurts at the phrase, "she deeply suf...my heart hurts at the phrase, "she deeply suffers." i hope she finds a love that sets her heart free...Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01221703763145912238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-72357420167591148422011-09-09T05:32:41.459-07:002011-09-09T05:32:41.459-07:00I love when you do the loop poetry. This one is be...I love when you do the loop poetry. This one is beautiful. Speaking about love and allowing it to continue without erosion, a very good thought.<br /><br />peaceSpadomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17781369901345409341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-25473412945333962242011-09-08T09:56:01.755-07:002011-09-08T09:56:01.755-07:00Powerful...all she suffers she keeps insidePowerful...all she suffers she keeps insideSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-8394635080969631422011-09-08T09:43:24.301-07:002011-09-08T09:43:24.301-07:00nice loops RS...thanks for the write up...She is b...nice loops RS...thanks for the write up...She is beautiful..!!<br /><br />thanks for reminding me of the loop poetry...its been a long time since i have written one...will write one soon..!!Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-52031094554240980112011-09-08T09:36:43.263-07:002011-09-08T09:36:43.263-07:00You have portrayed a beautiful 'she', a wo...You have portrayed a beautiful 'she', a woman very devoted and having single-minded love and loyalty!! Good one and a tribute to her RS!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-7670383466369390892011-09-08T09:24:51.343-07:002011-09-08T09:24:51.343-07:00It causes much erosion..carrying the weight of see...It causes much erosion..carrying the weight of seeing..holding it inside..sometimes you just need to let it out..Jae ;)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-35313418383058442672011-09-08T05:32:22.159-07:002011-09-08T05:32:22.159-07:00Ah!Nice..love the loopsAh!Nice..love the loopsUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.com