tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post7123619675522757454..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: Infant Opens Eyes..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-66080887891757104582011-09-07T11:55:36.023-07:002011-09-07T11:55:36.023-07:00The emotions of the mother are quite deep and beau...The emotions of the mother are quite deep and beautiful.. your haiku got it right, RS! :)Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-89783119096261435222011-09-06T20:18:24.242-07:002011-09-06T20:18:24.242-07:00awesome take RS....I loved the first one...beautif...awesome take RS....I loved the first one...beautifully penned :)<br /><br />the second one...i laughed out loud ..!!!yamini medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02871965869128929972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-63928643216057359442011-09-06T18:52:31.919-07:002011-09-06T18:52:31.919-07:00The second one prompted me to laugh out loud. Char...The second one prompted me to laugh out loud. Charming!<br /><br />Kisses <a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/09/06/kiss/" rel="nofollow">here</a> and <a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/09/06/weeds/" rel="nofollow">here</a> and <a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/09/06/kisses/" rel="nofollow">here</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-18336978210348511042011-09-06T18:20:53.759-07:002011-09-06T18:20:53.759-07:00Tenderness in the first, and charming whimsical fu...Tenderness in the first, and charming whimsical fun in the second! Well done ~~ :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-1075640903188765032011-09-06T12:09:38.852-07:002011-09-06T12:09:38.852-07:00Must have gone to whisper sweet nothings into his ...Must have gone to whisper sweet nothings into his ear RS!! :DNankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-886337629109938232011-09-06T10:15:29.420-07:002011-09-06T10:15:29.420-07:00Honestly you could start and ant/elephant blog I a...Honestly you could start and ant/elephant blog I am loving every story you tell of them, this one was so much fun!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-85838591703504611782011-09-06T06:34:21.790-07:002011-09-06T06:34:21.790-07:00Two great haiku.
First one sad and poignant.
Secon...Two great haiku.<br />First one sad and poignant.<br />Second one made me smile - delivering a kiss can sometimes be hard work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-33988927943557963562011-09-06T05:32:40.981-07:002011-09-06T05:32:40.981-07:00ur first haiku reminds me when my kids were yet sm...ur first haiku reminds me when my kids were yet small and i've had colds and would not be allowed to kiss them...:(<br /><br />the ant and el...that's a very nice tale..:)<br /><br />wonderful haikus RS!<br /><br />promise to read the rest later...:)Amitynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-64204953046565384492011-09-06T01:31:46.889-07:002011-09-06T01:31:46.889-07:00I love both of them but your elephant/ant series i...I love both of them but your elephant/ant series is inspired.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-43532943485486077572011-09-05T22:11:37.705-07:002011-09-05T22:11:37.705-07:00:) :) the love of a mother beyond the depth of any...:) :) the love of a mother beyond the depth of any ocean..<br /><br />i am loving this series of ant and elephant :P :D<br /><br />loved them bothTweetyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15370849911077398353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-53941869887212195842011-09-05T20:35:26.839-07:002011-09-05T20:35:26.839-07:00The Elephant's Ant -- the best Haiku ever! He...The Elephant's Ant -- the best Haiku ever! Here's the untold story:<br /><br />Ant wants Elephant<br />to kiss her, he starts looking <br />and can't find her lipsJudithwesterfieldhttp://judithwesterfield.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-83222556778977446452011-09-05T19:14:16.520-07:002011-09-05T19:14:16.520-07:00love the second one, understand the first one, so ...love the second one, understand the first one, so hard when that happensChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-62169373397814082222011-09-05T18:32:56.081-07:002011-09-05T18:32:56.081-07:00That first one broke my heart!That first one broke my heart!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-86401612840140913972011-09-05T17:08:22.993-07:002011-09-05T17:08:22.993-07:00There may be reasons why the infant could not be k...There may be reasons why the infant could not be kissed. A pity! The elephant is too hazardous a journey to climb? Beautiful verses!kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-10956183054747821032011-09-05T17:08:19.937-07:002011-09-05T17:08:19.937-07:00I agree with Gemma and Andy; but, Ramesh, what I a...I agree with Gemma and Andy; but, Ramesh, what I always enjoy most are your funny and whimsical pieces! They are so charming.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06291220353313572984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-44267501598577002452011-09-05T16:48:47.370-07:002011-09-05T16:48:47.370-07:00Cool! I'll second what Gemma said.Cool! I'll second what Gemma said.andy sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-13146496133194636172011-09-05T13:50:44.801-07:002011-09-05T13:50:44.801-07:00Beautiful sensitivity in the first haiku and some ...Beautiful sensitivity in the first haiku and some quirky fun in the second!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.com