tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post9008569009571629997..comments2024-03-19T00:16:02.419-07:00Comments on A Little More Than Ordinary...: I Buckle My Shoes..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-42600784826067373822010-12-31T23:10:14.529-08:002010-12-31T23:10:14.529-08:00Great use of the prompts...
Loved the haiku a lot ...Great use of the prompts...<br />Loved the haiku a lot :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-56188658791013466682010-12-31T07:09:38.786-08:002010-12-31T07:09:38.786-08:00one two,
buckle my shoe...
love the words and how...one two,<br />buckle my shoe...<br /><br />love the words and how you blend them in your poetry.<br />well done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-38429027186948519572010-12-30T18:14:11.500-08:002010-12-30T18:14:11.500-08:00Ramesh, loved the first one especially. I actuall...Ramesh, loved the first one especially. I actually saw someone fall in a pothole, not comtemplating poetry, but punching out a message on their IPhone! At least you fall in potholes with good reason, and to great effect. BRAVO!<br /><br />Great 3WW this week, huh? Amy BLAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-49175217223473788392010-12-30T09:29:33.456-08:002010-12-30T09:29:33.456-08:00Its beautiful sir! Could picture it, the walk and ...Its beautiful sir! Could picture it, the walk and all the thoughts building up and hurrying home!!! Wonderful energy...My best wishesMedhinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17833745510877201001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-82580525127527598192010-12-30T08:16:34.001-08:002010-12-30T08:16:34.001-08:00you are good writer, a comb before and now you buc...you are good writer, a comb before and now you buckle your shoes ..niceUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-45275739787053370612010-12-30T06:47:41.543-08:002010-12-30T06:47:41.543-08:00Happy New Year
I enjoy reading your posts ,its li...Happy New Year <br />I enjoy reading your posts ,its like each word is felt within ,very amazing feeling <br /><br /><br /><br />http://soulwanderingsoul.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-1366992041244896032010-12-29T22:45:40.038-08:002010-12-29T22:45:40.038-08:00AAhhhaaa!! Really Nice!!
~ Happy New Year~ :)AAhhhaaa!! Really Nice!! <br /><br />~ Happy New Year~ :)Lalita Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09688302536340138757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-60874358544316661602010-12-29T17:42:09.460-08:002010-12-29T17:42:09.460-08:00A great way to weave the three words into your poe...A great way to weave the three words into your poem and Haiku!Love the images they invoke.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-31437463239584266532010-12-29T15:49:17.137-08:002010-12-29T15:49:17.137-08:00On a more practical note..you don't really hav...On a more practical note..you don't really have buckles on your shoes, do you? :)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-50738330255833175152010-12-29T15:36:14.372-08:002010-12-29T15:36:14.372-08:00yeah! what they all sed!yeah! what they all sed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-56959754418802835912010-12-29T12:30:29.975-08:002010-12-29T12:30:29.975-08:00Great rhythm and pacing.Great rhythm and pacing.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-61568007150884461392010-12-29T09:31:23.661-08:002010-12-29T09:31:23.661-08:00Oh! Those self-created potholes (aren't they a...Oh! Those self-created potholes (aren't they all?) get me every time. Fortunately, I am learning the lessons necessary to prevent future falls into the same chasms. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-8354102538234209092010-12-29T09:28:26.582-08:002010-12-29T09:28:26.582-08:00Pyaara Dost,
Good Evening!
What an imagination,m...Pyaara Dost,<br /> Good Evening!<br />What an imagination,my friend!<br />An awesome post!Hats off to you!<br />I am so happy that I have come across you in blogosphere.:)<br />May God Bless You To write more!<br />Wishing you a Wonderful and Prosperous New Year To you,<br /> Sasneham,<br /> Anuanupamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13377958701532875004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-34260235075368045342010-12-29T07:57:10.319-08:002010-12-29T07:57:10.319-08:00Every time I visit here, I find the 'gifts of ...Every time I visit here, I find the 'gifts of your imagination unpacking' for all of us to read! :)Shailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07013993041882385722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-46258143833072924912010-12-29T07:14:45.503-08:002010-12-29T07:14:45.503-08:00I love the way you created this rambling atmospher...I love the way you created this rambling atmosphere of introspection, while adding the gentle humor of the pot-holes.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-74673069585876148352010-12-29T07:13:04.990-08:002010-12-29T07:13:04.990-08:00The ordinary and the sublime walking together. Exc...The ordinary and the sublime walking together. Excellent.<br />By the way, I'm back - with a new blog and website.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-71735979506981999212010-12-29T06:09:55.128-08:002010-12-29T06:09:55.128-08:00quite a picture...the ramble, the potholes. It'...quite a picture...the ramble, the potholes. It's really quite complete in the first three lines.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-32010487820207360072010-12-29T05:17:50.368-08:002010-12-29T05:17:50.368-08:00I love the sandwich of words you have created amid...I love the sandwich of words you have created amidst the image of buckling your shoes..I can really see you walking and thinking of what to write next! JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-68082944843231190692010-12-29T04:59:57.861-08:002010-12-29T04:59:57.861-08:00I like that it comes full circle as most thoughts ...I like that it comes full circle as most thoughts do! Great lines in here!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-53214596381211998872010-12-29T04:33:01.834-08:002010-12-29T04:33:01.834-08:00Like those before, it is the rhythm that stands ou...Like those before, it is the rhythm that stands out for me.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-80269547845686860182010-12-29T04:28:08.316-08:002010-12-29T04:28:08.316-08:00The poem has an enchanting rhythm skipping through...The poem has an enchanting rhythm skipping through the thrills of ideas forming, but remembering to watch for potholes! Like the circle of the poem!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-27180523105345322732010-12-29T04:18:09.647-08:002010-12-29T04:18:09.647-08:00While walking that I find the gift
Of imagination ...While walking that I find the gift<br />Of imagination too unpacking<br />Itself at corners unseen<br />And unexplored <br /><br />You have such a fun way of describing things and I love it :) <br /><br />This has so much of good humor and all directed to yourself. Keep it up RS!! You are always a pleasure to read and keeps our spirits up too!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-840511276510189184.post-51809143588466142562010-12-29T02:37:24.307-08:002010-12-29T02:37:24.307-08:00Careful RS!!
Don't get lost in your thoughts ...Careful RS!! <br />Don't get lost in your thoughts while evading those potholes.Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.com