Thursday, September 2, 2010

3 WW ( 2) : Turning Positive



A negative thought
Danced on the hard floor
Of my mind
Suddenly slipped
And breaking the barriers
Pulled by humble gravity
Fell on the soft surface
Of the heart,
And lo! Turned positive..


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Don't bring negatives
To the surface, why break
Sculpted myths..


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Prompted by Heart..


OLD HOUSE


Dilapidated
Door Crackles, recognizing
Footsteps from the past
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7 comments:

  1. NankaSeptember 2, 2010 at 10:34 AM

    Lo and behold Rameshji...that positivity is exuberating!! Like this new avatar.

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  2. RumyaSeptember 2, 2010 at 10:36 AM

    "Suddenly slipped
    And breaking the barriers" - Lovely!!

    You really have broken all barriers Rameshji and I see you soaring... :)

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  3. Sh@sSeptember 2, 2010 at 1:02 PM

    Mind and heart at loggerheads. Glad atleast one of them turns us positive :)

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  4. Harshad MehtaSeptember 2, 2010 at 7:09 PM

    Good ones.

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  5. Nalini HebbarSeptember 3, 2010 at 1:44 AM

    All of them are great...loved the 2nd one...well hidden myths about oneself are painful when exposed...well said!
    the haiku, if i may say so, needs to be reduced to 17 or less syllables...I would suggest weather-beaten instead of dilapidated...:)

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  6. ToiSeptember 3, 2010 at 6:25 PM

    luv when negative turns positive - very good.

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  7. AmitySeptember 3, 2010 at 8:31 PM

    Well said Ramesh!

    It is a sign of strength to break negativity and be positive!

    Short but nicely written!

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