Monday, May 5, 2014

A Distant Home... Haiku..

Written for Haiku Horizons

Prompt: Ring




Her young round lips 
throw out white rings of smoke;
a distant home 


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A distant home;
Mom sells her rings to give 
her fairy wings


RS:)

11 comments:

  1. A very different one...
    But "her" presence is still there!

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  2. The second one is very poignant! My mom had to sell her jewelry to get me through school!

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  3. and look what she is doing...o my...so sad..

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  4. Loved this - a totally different take on the prompt. :)

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  5. Very emotional and touching !!

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  6. I really like each of these. They're like little stories.

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  7. Hi Rameshji!! How u doing? Hope you remember me from Leo's Haiku Heights.. It's been really long I read your exquisite work so thought of dropping by.. And I must add, I am not at all disappointed.. simply loved the second one..so touching!! Reegards.

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  8. Love the second one best. Awesome haiku!

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  9. This is beautiful ... your haiku have great stories in them :-)

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