Monday, September 15, 2014

Trained Syllables : Haiku

Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt : Train..

Trained Syllables


Happy train travel
she carries with her an
 unfinished tale;

**

 unfinished tale;
train of imagination halts
at haiku station

**

At haiku station
alight seasonal phrases;
trained syllables

**

Trained syllables
sit in haiku formation;
happy train travel


RS:)


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9 comments:

  1. rallentandaSeptember 15, 2014 at 1:07 AM

    happy train travel
    ramesh is being cryptic
    with his travel tales:)

    Anna Karenina is a great movie . The book is a lengthy tome which I have never completed.:)

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  2. LocomenteSeptember 15, 2014 at 2:55 AM

    Wow...
    This sounds like a continuation to mine...

    Very glad to read "her" after a break :)

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  3. HibernationnowSeptember 15, 2014 at 9:11 AM

    you must finish Anna K. lol, it was my summer project one year and yes, it is a project!!!!!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2014 at 7:10 PM

    What a wonderful play on words --- loved it :)

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  5. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 15, 2014 at 8:07 PM

    Fun and fabulous

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  6. UnknownSeptember 16, 2014 at 12:51 PM

    Interesting take on prompt. Loved it.

    Melanie

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  7. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 18, 2014 at 1:07 AM

    I just so love when one haiku creates another and then another ... lovely post!

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  8. SueQSeptember 20, 2014 at 8:12 AM

    I love how your haikus link together so nicely; just like a train. ;-)

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  9. UnknownOctober 1, 2014 at 6:09 AM

    A wonderful series of Haiku.

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