Haiku Horizons prompt “drum”
A distant sound of
drumbeats breaks night's silence;
someone is happy
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Someone is happy;
drumbeats and sound of her
musical anklets
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Musical anklets;
a bit of sky too is lit
as flames dance too
RS:)
I like the musical anklets. Happiness transmitted through dancing.
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I love your haiku, Ramesh. I felt as though I was there as I read it; the flames, the lady happily dancing with her anklets tinkling, and the sound if the drumbeats. It is very well written.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I like the story in you poetry.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great series -- but I really enjoy the third in the series -- beautiful, powerful, sensual at the same time. :)
ReplyDeleteAs always, she is lovely!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd so is your haiku sir :)
The "first" is perfect in it's imagery and language. My favorite as it can stand alone
ReplyDeleteYou do these sets so well everytime. I have to give that a try sometime. :)-
ReplyDeletelove thse series one rolling into another ... great read!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and complex story in simple words... love it!
ReplyDeleteDepth in the lines...
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