Monday, April 13, 2015

She Plucks A Cloud..

Haiku Horizons... Prompt: Needle.

 Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..





Needle can't sew them;
she fills her white pillow with
small pieces of cloud
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 Late addition: Inspired by the Haiku posted by Kokila Gupta..
Needles of your love
stitch with threads of  pain & joy;
my repaired heart..


RS:)



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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 13, 2015 at 10:07 AM

    Nicely written.

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  2. UnknownApril 13, 2015 at 10:38 AM

    Nice!! I can imagine how dreamy and soft that pillow is. ♥

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  3. Judith WesterfieldApril 13, 2015 at 11:13 AM

    DREAMY!

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  4. Kokila guptaApril 14, 2015 at 1:39 AM

    Kudos to your imagination ... beautiful !

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  5. AnthonyApril 14, 2015 at 11:35 AM

    Nice use of the word needle. Love the imagery in the first Haiku.

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  6. Kokila guptaApril 15, 2015 at 4:35 AM

    beautiful ..once gain..
    The last line in itself is such a sweet declaration.. a weathered , seen all heart, finally repaired .:)
    Thanks for the share :)

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  7. J CApril 16, 2015 at 2:14 PM

    So very beautiful Ramesh. Soft words.

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  8. rebeccaApril 17, 2015 at 6:22 AM

    love your pillow of clouds Ramesh!

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  9. Gazal BharadwajMay 20, 2015 at 8:47 AM

    with the threads of pain and joy....

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