Join me in practising Happiness!!!
Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Did this really happen? Your haiku certainly conveys an immediacy and the movement of "earthquake".
so do not munch too many chocolates and cakes. else the after- math will be more severe than any earthquake. hahah.
high sugaryou will explode intofrosted cream puffs
well well... do take care... :-) Hey RS - do hop over to Drishti someday... would love your feedback on my Haikus... here's a link on the same prompt... http://drishti.co/2015/05/13/apartheid/
I did visit your blog.. at Drishti and found it to be very interesting.. Wanted to leave a comment.. couldn't reach there.. Don't know why..Keep writing.. You write well..RS:)
Hey thank you so much RS... am elated... well the Disqus platform may take a while to load if the internet is slow... considering changing it.. so I can get feedback from veterans like you... Cheers and have a lovely evening :-)
I enjoyed the immediacy of this poem.