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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
well well... do take care... :-) Hey RS - do hop over to Drishti someday... would love your feedback on my Haikus... here's a link on the same prompt... http://drishti.co/2015/05/13/apartheid/
Hey thank you so much RS... am elated... well the Disqus platform may take a while to load if the internet is slow... considering changing it.. so I can get feedback from veterans like you... Cheers and have a lovely evening :-)
Did this really happen? Your haiku certainly conveys an immediacy and the movement of "earthquake".
ReplyDeleteso do not munch too many chocolates and cakes. else the after- math will be more severe than any earthquake. hahah.
ReplyDeletehigh sugar
ReplyDeleteyou will explode into
frosted cream puffs
Funny! ;-)
Deletewell well... do take care... :-)
ReplyDeleteHey RS - do hop over to Drishti someday... would love your feedback on my Haikus... here's a link on the same prompt...
http://drishti.co/2015/05/13/apartheid/
I did visit your blog.. at Drishti and found it to be very interesting.. Wanted to leave a comment.. couldn't reach there.. Don't know why..
ReplyDeleteKeep writing.. You write well..
RS:)
Hey thank you so much RS... am elated...
ReplyDeletewell the Disqus platform may take a while to load if the internet is slow... considering changing it.. so I can get feedback from veterans like you... Cheers and have a lovely evening :-)
I enjoyed the immediacy of this poem.
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