Sunday, August 23, 2015

She Draws A Bright Morning.. .. Haiku...

Haiku Horizon... Prompt: Brush..

 Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..

She Draws A Bright Morning...


Give me paint and brush
to draw happier pictures;
white canvass of life

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White canvass of life
unknowingly gets black spots;
give me paint and brush

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Give me paint and brush,
I want to draw my own moon ;
cut sheets of blue sky..

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Cut sheets of blue sky;
she draws a bright morning, then
gives me paint and brush


RS:)

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10 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 23, 2015 at 11:12 PM

    Lovely thought ''I want to draw my own moon''.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 24, 2015 at 10:45 AM

    nicely done!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 24, 2015 at 8:42 PM

    so nice :)

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  4. UnknownAugust 25, 2015 at 6:06 AM

    wow... awesome :-) love the last verse...
    and here we are: http://drishti.co/2015/08/24/canaan/
    your feedback awaited... :-)

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  5. AnonymousAugust 25, 2015 at 4:11 PM

    Love that second one, it does get messy at times!

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  6. UnknownAugust 26, 2015 at 10:06 PM

    I love this drawing your own moon...the back and forth made me see a grandparent painting with a grandchild...taking turns :)

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  7. Bastet's Waka LibraryAugust 29, 2015 at 10:21 PM

    Lovely ... I like how you used the haiku to create a dialogue.

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  8. AliceAugust 30, 2015 at 7:37 PM

    I enjoyed the narrative flow of this haiku cascade. well done.

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  9. J CSeptember 1, 2015 at 7:01 AM

    This is very pleasant Ramesh. Thank you for sharing these thoughts.

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  10. Gillena CoxSeptember 1, 2015 at 9:38 PM

    I read your haiku of different layers and relish your call to the creative process.

    Much love...

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