Monday, November 30, 2015

He Creates A Hole In the Sky....

Written for Haiku Horizons Prompt: Ground
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...


He Creates A Hole In the Sky....


He flutters his wings
for the flight beyond skies;
firm feet on the ground
Firm feet on the ground;
he creates a hole in the sky
with a sharp resolve


With a sharp resolve
he lands in a starry maze;
a slippery ground


A slippery ground
up there confounds him;
he flutters his wings


He flutters his wings
for flying back to ground;
she had always known..


RS:)
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 30, 2015 at 2:40 AM

    a lovely cascading haiku, well-penned :)

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  2. J CNovember 30, 2015 at 3:45 AM

    Very nice, Ramesh. Tells a whole story, beginning to end.

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  3. Reading PleasureNovember 30, 2015 at 4:40 AM

    Wonderful cascade, Ramesh.

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  4. AliceNovember 30, 2015 at 9:24 AM

    Lovely. I enjoy your cascade form and romantic narrative flow.

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  5. Carol CampbellNovember 30, 2015 at 11:42 AM

    The flow of cascades are so nice and you have written of it very well!

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  6. TournesolDansUnJardinNovember 30, 2015 at 6:34 PM

    This truly made me smile, what a lovely romantic story! :)

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  7. rallentandaDecember 1, 2015 at 2:53 PM

    Love will do that to you:)

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