Haiku Horizons..
Prompt: Sleep..
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.
Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.
She Smiles In Her Sleep
Golden wind chime sings
songs of a glorious morning;
she smiles in her sleep
She smiles in her sleep;
fragrant blooms of dreams float
in the empty space
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No Sleep In Her Eyes..
In the empty space
she draws pictures of her doubts;
no sleep in her eyes
No sleep in her eyes;
pearls of water roll out to
merge with her pillow
RS:)
Beautiful imagery. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!!
DeleteI like this one: "In the empty space
ReplyDeleteshe draws pictures of her doubts;
no sleep in her eyes" Well done, I enjoyed them all.
So nice of you Bekkie.. Thanks!!
DeleteVery beautifully written .. with so many layers of meaning. Bastet
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Bastet!!! So nice of your for your appreciation..
DeleteBeautiful!!! the first series reminded me of drifting off to dreams and light of spirit, the second one is very deep and sad. The images of both are just stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tournesol CLR for your nice comment.. RS:)
DeleteDifferent thought. Awesome.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ushaji..
DeleteNo sleep in her eyes harbours a lot of pain and tears...sad !
ReplyDeleteYes, I wanted to show contrast.. Hope I succeeded..
DeleteRS:)
superb imagery :)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful, Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteDreams in her eyes that don't let her sleep. Tears gather around dead dreams in the shells of her eyes, fall off as pearls when she decides to come back to life.
ReplyDeleteRegards
RM
I love the imagery of blooms of dreams!
ReplyDeletedear ramesh-having spent the last week in bed alone-very ill-this touches me deeply.thank you for your place in all our hearts. i bow to the beauty of you.
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