Monday, January 25, 2016

She Smiles In Her Sleep; No Sleep In Her Eyes....



Haiku Horizons..

Prompt: Sleep..

Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.


She Smiles In Her Sleep


Golden wind chime sings
songs of a glorious morning;
she smiles in her sleep


She smiles in her sleep;
fragrant blooms of dreams float
in the empty space


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No Sleep In Her Eyes..

In the empty space
she draws pictures of her doubts;
no sleep in her eyes


No sleep in her eyes;
pearls of water roll out to 
merge with her pillow



RS:)






17 comments:

  1. I like this one: "In the empty space
    she draws pictures of her doubts;
    no sleep in her eyes" Well done, I enjoyed them all.

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  2. Very beautifully written .. with so many layers of meaning. Bastet

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    1. Thanks a lot Bastet!!! So nice of your for your appreciation..

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  3. Beautiful!!! the first series reminded me of drifting off to dreams and light of spirit, the second one is very deep and sad. The images of both are just stunning!

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    1. Thank you Tournesol CLR for your nice comment.. RS:)

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  4. No sleep in her eyes harbours a lot of pain and tears...sad !

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    1. Yes, I wanted to show contrast.. Hope I succeeded..

      RS:)

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  5. Dreams in her eyes that don't let her sleep. Tears gather around dead dreams in the shells of her eyes, fall off as pearls when she decides to come back to life.
    Regards
    RM

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  6. dear ramesh-having spent the last week in bed alone-very ill-this touches me deeply.thank you for your place in all our hearts. i bow to the beauty of you.

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