Monday, March 14, 2016

Thoughts of Sun Arrive... Haiku..



Haiku Horizon.. Mind

Shared With Haiku My Heart...



Ah, a haiku fan;
my mind paints an evening
with a smiling moon


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With a smiling moon
laughs millions of stars;
night sky of my mind


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Night sky of my mind
awaits its transformation;
thoughts of sun arrive


As proposed by Rall in the comments.. I pick the last one in the chain as:


Thoughts of sun arrive;
my mind paints an evening 
with a smiling moon.. 

Thanks Rall.. 


RS:)


9 comments:

  1. i love thoughts of the sun.... brilliant RS :-)

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  2. Love the first one

    thoughts of sun arrive
    my mind paints and evening
    with a smiling moon

    We are in Autumn. I miss our summer already.

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  3. Very nice Ramesh. I love thoughts of the sun.

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  4. Just so so beautiful...love this!

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  5. I so love smiling moon...last week the crescent moon smiled down on me:)

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