Haiku Horizon.. Mind
Shared With Haiku My Heart...
Ah, a haiku fan;
my mind paints an evening
with a smiling moon
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With a smiling moon
laughs millions of stars;
night sky of my mind
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Night sky of my mind
awaits its transformation;
thoughts of sun arrive
As proposed by Rall in the comments.. I pick the last one in the chain as:
Thoughts of sun arrive;
my mind paints an evening
with a smiling moon..
Thanks Rall..
RS:)
i love thoughts of the sun.... brilliant RS :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the first one
ReplyDeletethoughts of sun arrive
my mind paints and evening
with a smiling moon
We are in Autumn. I miss our summer already.
Nice Rall! Happy thoughts! :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice Ramesh. I love thoughts of the sun.
ReplyDeleteHaiku! Bless you!
ReplyDeleteJust so so beautiful...love this!
ReplyDeleteLight and lovely!
ReplyDeleteI so love smiling moon...last week the crescent moon smiled down on me:)
ReplyDeleteNicely penned!
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