I talked and talked
Without ever getting tired
But then
You got, listening..
Now I live quietly
In the Layers of
Deafening silence
A strange place, that!
But It’s a happier me
For I often find you around
Floating through
The haze of my dreams
And before I can embrace you
I hear the sounds of
Fluttering wings of thoughts
Swiftly fading away
Making me cringe
In my silent space
Wondering,
If ever you choose to
Have a brief sojourn
In those few fleeting moments
What will we talk…
emotions beautifully portrayed, specially the ending..
ReplyDeleteso many feelings and thoughts are inspired by this poem. There is some loveliness and loneliness to it.
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me of the moments when we shared our silence and how we communicated in that silence. I can feel a tear coming down my eye.
ReplyDelete"If ever you choose to
ReplyDeleteHave a brief sojourn
In those few fleeting moments
What will we talk…"
Makes one wonder....
Beautiful poem.
Wonder what can one talk with silence.?
ReplyDeletePoem takes me in deeper silence.
Thank you.
that reasoning is lovely!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. Great peace in this.
ReplyDeleteThere is much to be learned through silence. Nice dreamy feel...sadness... I like it.
ReplyDeleteThis was truly lovely...it felt very spiritual to me. Thank you for sharing your words!
ReplyDeleteSilence is a lovely companion!
ReplyDeleteI sense a painful disconnect here. Powerful poem.
ReplyDeleteSo much we almost experience. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Megha, Lee, Rajat, Harshadji,Preml, Sandra(If), AnthonyNorth,Brenda,Sweetest in the Gale, Tumblewords, Sandy and Carina..
ReplyDeleteYour visit and comments delight and inspire.. keep visiting and I will too..find time to look at some of the initial postings..
A lot of emotion and power in your words Ramesh. There's some sadness that also comes through, though sometimes there can be a comfort in the silence of introspection.
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