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Sunday, May 16, 2010
Thoughts on OSI Prompt - Trembling
The tiny rosebud
Opened up, a bit unsure,
Trembling,
Waiting fingers stayed still..
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" Welcome breeze!"
Exclaim fresh leaves
But the dry cry, trembling
"No please, no please."
( From my book A Little More Than ordinary)
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A mild tremor
And the skyscraper stood trembling
Despite a deep foundation
Yet, far deeper are the wounds
Of mother earth , who
Expresses anguish, occasionally
Only if man could empathise
For the sake of his own prolongation..
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Whenever I wrote
He trembled with fear
For, he thought
He will have to lend an ear..
And I too
Never showed mercy
While narrating
My spontaneous poetry...
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thank you for such a lovely read!
ReplyDeletePoetry that is true need not worry about mercy!
ReplyDeleteeach poem is wonderful. I have felt the way the last poem suggests!
ReplyDeleteOh, these are wonderful!
ReplyDeleteFour frames of fantastic wordplay. u captured that essence of tremble in all Mr.Sood :) i liked the second one best of all.
ReplyDeleteHi all,
ReplyDeleteI am so happy to find you visiting me and inspiring with your comments..I agree with you Sandy and hence have been able to continue writing..
Thanks friends..
What a lesson in perspective in the second poem. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteanother fantastic tremble poem...:)
ReplyDeletekeep writing Ramesh, not many have that kind of gift!
Thanks Mojo and Amity..you inpire..yes I will keep writing..
ReplyDeleteThese were good, I loved the first one.
ReplyDeleteThe last one was quite funny, however we don't tremble at the thought of your poetry! :)