Friday, January 18, 2013

A Clear Sky



Sunday OSI : Retirement
Saturday Haiku heights: Disk
&
Today Friday for Haiku My Heart
 
 
A Clear Sky
 
Ah, crescent
shines gloriously;
a clear sky
 
A clear sky;
stars try to make an
 impression  
 
Impression
on mind is blurred;
dusk descends
 
Dusk descends;
mind begins to plan
retirement
 
Retirement -
I wipe out the word;
heart renews
 
Heart renews
as light filters through;
ah, crescent
 
Ah, crescent
shines gloriously;
a clear sky..
 
 
RS:)
 
 
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25 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:34 AM

    I like the story here, the worries and the quickly tossing them in the bin.. enter happiness.

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  2. Amrit SinhaJanuary 19, 2013 at 4:18 AM

    Beautifully said ... you have captured dusk perfectly :-)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 19, 2013 at 5:22 AM

    I too am wiping out the word retirement, since it is not something I will ever be able to do!

    Love Story

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  4. carol l mckennaJanuary 19, 2013 at 6:35 AM

    Lovely cascading haiku ~ 'retirement' is a statement of mind to me ~ doubt you were ever a 'retiring person' ~ You probably will always create ~ isn't that being productive? and moving on to the next stage ~ just my thoughts ~

    (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  5. ninotJanuary 19, 2013 at 7:02 AM

    Ramesh, I love your cascading haiku.

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  6. LollyJanuary 19, 2013 at 9:55 AM

    Best lines: "retirement/I wipe out the word/ I like that!

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  7. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 19, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    Retirement from one cascade to embrace the next. Forever retiring from one precious moment to the next.

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  8. WabiSabiJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:06 PM

    Perhaps night will fall on one phase of life and the sun will rise on something else wonderful!!

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  9. The Write GirlJanuary 19, 2013 at 9:23 PM

    I love the clear sky you paint here, Ramesh. It is full of glory and wonder.

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  10. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 20, 2013 at 12:31 AM

    Wow! Why dusk had to mean giving up! I liked you tossed aside the idea.

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  11. anthonynorthJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:42 AM

    The prompts flowed through this beautifully.

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  12. Lisa at GreenbowJanuary 20, 2013 at 5:49 AM

    For sure retirement isn't for everyone.

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  13. BarbaraJanuary 20, 2013 at 1:52 PM

    I love the optimism in your cascade. Retire or not, keep that clear sky in sight!

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  14. TeresaJanuary 20, 2013 at 4:23 PM

    This is great! I'm madly hoping for retirement soon. :-)

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  15. rebeccaJanuary 20, 2013 at 6:46 PM

    just promise you never retire from writing haiku!
    ramesh, you are a genius! thank you for being here sharing your beauty.

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  16. JimJanuary 20, 2013 at 9:11 PM

    I like your 'retirement' at dusk, Ramesh.

    Chain haiku are hard for me to read but this one goes fairly smoothly.
    ..

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  17. Lady In ReadJanuary 20, 2013 at 9:42 PM

    love your haiku here - each and every one of them.

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  18. Sanjana January 20, 2013 at 11:05 PM

    Hello Ramesh ji..I am so happy to visit you after so long! Pardon my absence, I know you will :)

    Nice set of haiku here..I love the transition from dusk to night to morning.Thank you :)

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/2013/01/dusk.html

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  19. Harshad MehtaJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:46 AM

    Wipe out the word! Yes that is what one will want to do.

    A state of denial nicely captured.

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  20. Preeti S.January 21, 2013 at 5:39 AM

    Thoughts - like forgotten shells on the shore; we pick them up, take a peek inside and then put them back down. A few steps ahead, we might find another one.

    Wonderful haiku.

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  21. HazelJanuary 21, 2013 at 7:27 AM

    I enjoy your compositions with this form. "light filters through" - I love that image!

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  22. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    Awesome as always. Soaked in your haiku! :-)

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  23. Eliz FrankJanuary 22, 2013 at 6:42 PM

    This ends on a positive note... I like it.
    Eliz

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  24. PranitaJanuary 22, 2013 at 10:38 PM

    There's so much life in ur works! Love that..

    The scintillating bond

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  25. UnknownJanuary 23, 2013 at 6:49 AM

    Wonderful outlook on life my friend. Nicely said.


    Melanie

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