Friday, January 11, 2013

Sun Rises..



One Single Impression -Sunday: Naked
Haiku Heights - Saturday: Death
&
Today , Friday for Haiku My Heart..
 
(3-5-3)
 
 
 
Death itself
is a naked truth;
Sun rises 
 
Sun rises;
she dances amidst
dry leaves..
 
 
RS:)
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27 comments:

  1. SpadomanJanuary 11, 2013 at 4:33 AM

    Yes. Death. The final chapter, the only truth., and the beat goes on. Fabulous.

    Peace.

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  2. somepinkflowersJanuary 11, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    oh That Sun !!
    always
    on the move
    no matter
    what happens !!

    thank goodness ♥

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  3. carol l mckennaJanuary 11, 2013 at 7:40 AM

    sun rising and death ~ cyclical life ~ well penned haiku ~

    A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

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  4. LauraJanuary 11, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    so beautiful!

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  5. MeriJanuary 11, 2013 at 3:18 PM

    Yes, cycles. And life, death, go on.

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  6. Maude LynnJanuary 11, 2013 at 7:10 PM

    Beautiful!

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 12, 2013 at 4:05 AM

    Lovely rhythm!

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  8. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 12, 2013 at 9:06 AM

    cyclic, rhythmic, life and death. I like the role of sun here!

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  9. Sri ValliJanuary 12, 2013 at 9:13 AM

    " Sun rises;
    she dances amidst
    dry leaves.."

    Ahh! Lovely!

    Fragrant memories

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  10. anthonynorthJanuary 12, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    A great image in that last one.

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  11. joanneJanuary 12, 2013 at 12:52 PM

    indeed, the 'naked-est' of truths.....

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  12. rebeccaJanuary 12, 2013 at 4:52 PM

    gorgeous writing.
    i am deeply moved with your import, simplicity.

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  13. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 12, 2013 at 6:59 PM

    "a naked truth" - perfection.

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  14. MaritJanuary 12, 2013 at 11:53 PM

    Just a few words, but they become very powerful when you put them together. Wonderful!

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  15. Lisa at GreenbowJanuary 13, 2013 at 9:06 AM

    A lot of naked truths are difficult.

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  16. Gillena CoxJanuary 13, 2013 at 9:36 AM

    great pair of haiku


    much love...

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 13, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    Loved this take on death ~ it really is the one final indisputable truth isn;t it x

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  18. SusanJanuary 13, 2013 at 5:09 PM

    Beautiful. In its time, I expect death is exactly this!

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  19. Lady In ReadJanuary 13, 2013 at 10:27 PM

    enjoyed your haiku - both of them.. and words so perfectly used

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  20. J Cosmo NewberyJanuary 14, 2013 at 3:46 AM

    Indeed. Death is about as naked as it gets.

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  21. vivinfranceJanuary 14, 2013 at 4:31 AM

    Naked we come into this world, but I hope not naked when we leave it. Lovely senryu.

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  22. totomaiJanuary 14, 2013 at 4:44 AM

    wow. so melancholic.

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  23. Priti LisaJanuary 14, 2013 at 7:57 AM

    death and birth...so close they are almost the same...♥

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  24. The Write GirlJanuary 15, 2013 at 5:27 PM

    "Death is a naked truth." What a powerful line Ramesh.

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  25. Harshad MehtaJanuary 16, 2013 at 2:49 AM

    Yes, truth is always there yet we pretend as if it is for others!

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  26. Eliz FrankJanuary 16, 2013 at 3:26 AM

    Indeed she does... in her stealthy ways. :-)
    I've been writing my haiku on my blogspot blog.
    http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
    Eliz

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  27. Vaishali JainJanuary 22, 2013 at 12:02 AM

    Splendid!

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