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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Yes. Death. The final chapter, the only truth., and the beat goes on. Fabulous.Peace.
oh That Sun !!always on the moveno matterwhat happens !!thank goodness ♥
sun rising and death ~ cyclical life ~ well penned haiku ~A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^
Yes, cycles. And life, death, go on.
cyclic, rhythmic, life and death. I like the role of sun here!
" Sun rises;she dances amidstdry leaves.."Ahh! Lovely! Fragrant memories
A great image in that last one.
indeed, the 'naked-est' of truths.....
gorgeous writing.i am deeply moved with your import, simplicity.
"a naked truth" - perfection.
Just a few words, but they become very powerful when you put them together. Wonderful!
A lot of naked truths are difficult.
great pair of haikumuch love...
Loved this take on death ~ it really is the one final indisputable truth isn;t it x
Beautiful. In its time, I expect death is exactly this!
enjoyed your haiku - both of them.. and words so perfectly used
Indeed. Death is about as naked as it gets.
Naked we come into this world, but I hope not naked when we leave it. Lovely senryu.
wow. so melancholic.
death and birth...so close they are almost the same...♥
"Death is a naked truth." What a powerful line Ramesh.
Yes, truth is always there yet we pretend as if it is for others!
Indeed she does... in her stealthy ways. :-)I've been writing my haiku on my blogspot blog. http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.htmlEliz