Friday, January 11, 2013

Sun Rises..



One Single Impression -Sunday: Naked
Haiku Heights - Saturday: Death
&
Today , Friday for Haiku My Heart..
 
(3-5-3)
 
 
 
Death itself
is a naked truth;
Sun rises 
 
Sun rises;
she dances amidst
dry leaves..
 
 
RS:)

27 comments:

  1. Yes. Death. The final chapter, the only truth., and the beat goes on. Fabulous.

    Peace.

    ReplyDelete
  2. oh That Sun !!
    always
    on the move
    no matter
    what happens !!

    thank goodness ♥

    ReplyDelete
  3. sun rising and death ~ cyclical life ~ well penned haiku ~

    A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  4. Yes, cycles. And life, death, go on.

    ReplyDelete
  5. cyclic, rhythmic, life and death. I like the role of sun here!

    ReplyDelete
  6. " Sun rises;
    she dances amidst
    dry leaves.."

    Ahh! Lovely!

    Fragrant memories

    ReplyDelete
  7. indeed, the 'naked-est' of truths.....

    ReplyDelete
  8. gorgeous writing.
    i am deeply moved with your import, simplicity.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Just a few words, but they become very powerful when you put them together. Wonderful!

    ReplyDelete
  10. A lot of naked truths are difficult.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Loved this take on death ~ it really is the one final indisputable truth isn;t it x

    ReplyDelete
  12. Beautiful. In its time, I expect death is exactly this!

    ReplyDelete
  13. enjoyed your haiku - both of them.. and words so perfectly used

    ReplyDelete
  14. Indeed. Death is about as naked as it gets.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Naked we come into this world, but I hope not naked when we leave it. Lovely senryu.

    ReplyDelete
  16. death and birth...so close they are almost the same...♥

    ReplyDelete
  17. "Death is a naked truth." What a powerful line Ramesh.

    ReplyDelete
  18. Yes, truth is always there yet we pretend as if it is for others!

    ReplyDelete
  19. Indeed she does... in her stealthy ways. :-)
    I've been writing my haiku on my blogspot blog.
    http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
    Eliz

    ReplyDelete