Friday, July 26, 2013

Moisted Window Glass : Haiku

Written for


Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart



Moisted window glass;
lost, she scribbles his name
with her fingertip....

  
RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiJuly 26, 2013 at 4:46 AM

    LOst. I did't understand this.

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    1. Ramesh SoodJuly 26, 2013 at 4:55 AM

      Let us see if someone else does... let a visual appear in mind and you will know.. Kalpana.. think over..

      RS

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  2. J CJuly 26, 2013 at 5:00 AM

    This is so very imaginative Ramesh. I can see her standing at the window. I can feel her heart as she writes the name. I can imagine rain and lost loves. I wish I could paint what I see. Eleven words does all this. Love it!

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  3. LauraJuly 26, 2013 at 5:39 AM

    such a tender sadness in this Ramesh... beautiful.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 26, 2013 at 5:43 AM

    The sadness of this moment comes through your words and I can see her face reflected in the glass!http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/07/24/enthusiasm/

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  5. SpadomanJuly 26, 2013 at 5:46 AM

    I feel he'll be back and that she just misses him deeply. I'm an optimist today.


    Peace

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  6. Priti LisaJuly 26, 2013 at 6:21 AM

    Oh she must be young...
    a tender, romantic heart.
    She will find her way.
    Beautiful poem Ramesh.
    ♥

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  7. somepinkflowersJuly 26, 2013 at 6:47 AM

    {{ the Key Word here
    is
    'lost'

    isn't it ... }}

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  8. rebeccaJuly 26, 2013 at 7:04 AM

    so much romance inside of you ramesh!
    this is gorgeous and ripe with longing.

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  9. gmaJuly 26, 2013 at 7:49 AM

    I hope that girl finds herself and her loved one.

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  10. AnonymousJuly 26, 2013 at 9:23 AM

    young and tender love. I used to do that you know, write the name of my love on my exercise books :-)

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  11. rudraprayagaJuly 26, 2013 at 11:32 AM

    The theme got a new life when it passed through the haiku path.Nice.

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 26, 2013 at 1:56 PM

    Even as the name dries, the memory of it will linger forever...

    Haiku My Heart Riversong

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  13. Susie ClevengerJuly 26, 2013 at 9:23 PM

    This could be sad or reflective...beautiful haiku

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  14. UnknownJuly 27, 2013 at 4:40 AM

    Beautiful! I get it!

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  15. sojournerJuly 29, 2013 at 6:51 AM

    I see it as she scribbles! Nice visual.

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