Friday, July 19, 2013

Timeless Memory...



Prompt : Time



Sitting and talking
with her as adolescents;
timeless memory..

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Time moves back and forth
as she sits in her rocking chair;
ah, birds sing her thoughts



RS:)
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25 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiJuly 19, 2013 at 11:38 PM

    wow! so nice. as always your Haiku is lovely.

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  2. UnknownJuly 20, 2013 at 2:48 AM

    Wonderful Haiku. Old memories revived.

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  3. rallentandaJuly 20, 2013 at 3:41 AM

    Lovely. Growing old with your sweetheart.

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  4. Kalyan PanjaJuly 20, 2013 at 5:41 AM

    beautiful capture...lovely words!

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  5. LocomenteJuly 20, 2013 at 5:51 AM

    Both the haiku turned me nostalgic...
    Awesome it is sir!
    As always... :)

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  6. NankaJuly 20, 2013 at 8:59 AM

    Really growing old gracefully!!

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  7. LaTonya BaldwinJuly 20, 2013 at 9:38 AM

    romantic. lovely image and experience.

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  8. kaykualaJuly 20, 2013 at 10:51 AM

    Sharing each other's company is most fulfilling. Rightly so Ramesh!

    Hank

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  9. AnonymousJuly 20, 2013 at 12:12 PM

    wonderfully done, especially the second one

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  10. Siggi in Downeast MaineJuly 20, 2013 at 6:31 PM

    Two lovely images...
    the second won my heart.
    Thanks
    Peace
    Siggi

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  11. PanchaliJuly 21, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    Beautifully done, Ramesh. Rocking chair and time make a beautiful combination.

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  12. AnonymousJuly 21, 2013 at 2:38 AM

    Beautiful vivid haiku I could visualize so clearly =)

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  13. vivinfranceJuly 21, 2013 at 4:00 AM

    These beautiful haiku - the second took my breath away.

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  14. Amrit SinhaJuly 21, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Time passes :-)

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  15. Susie ClevengerJuly 21, 2013 at 4:32 PM

    So beautiful...love the second one

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  16. ReshmaJuly 21, 2013 at 8:08 PM

    Time is the secret treasurer of our memories...Very well said RS!!

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  17. LotusJuly 21, 2013 at 10:31 PM

    Lovely images. Nicely written.

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  18. Vaishali JainJuly 22, 2013 at 7:55 AM

    "Birds sing her thoughts" -- Awww. ^_^

    Perfect, sir. :)

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  19. AnonymousJuly 23, 2013 at 8:08 AM

    How beautiful this is. I can picture her sitting in her rtocking chair with the birds singing her thoughts. I do this myself in my shed in the garden, and I just drift away into my memories. Lovely haiku x

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  20. ClaudiaJuly 23, 2013 at 3:27 PM

    Ramesh,
    I really like the line "time moves back and forth". Wonderful haiku!
    Claudia

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  21. ekta khetanJuly 24, 2013 at 10:39 AM

    Beautiful Haiku! Loved them all.

    Time sitting in rocking chair is though provoking!

    www.numerounity.com

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  22. dianaJuly 24, 2013 at 10:45 AM

    Good afternoon,
    This is a gorgeous haiku reflection on the passage of time!

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  23. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 25, 2013 at 3:35 PM

    Fortunate the birds, to be singing her thoughts!

    Sleeping the Night

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  24. eyeographyJuly 28, 2013 at 10:47 PM

    beautiful haiku
    i can relate :)

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  25. AnonymousJuly 29, 2013 at 2:06 PM

    Love that second one.

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