Friday, July 19, 2013

Timeless Memory...



Prompt : Time



Sitting and talking
with her as adolescents;
timeless memory..

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Time moves back and forth
as she sits in her rocking chair;
ah, birds sing her thoughts



RS:)

26 comments:

  1. wow! so nice. as always your Haiku is lovely.

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  2. Wonderful Haiku. Old memories revived.

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  3. Lovely. Growing old with your sweetheart.

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  4. beautiful capture...lovely words!

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  5. Both the haiku turned me nostalgic...
    Awesome it is sir!
    As always... :)

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  6. Really growing old gracefully!!

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  7. romantic. lovely image and experience.

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  8. Sharing each other's company is most fulfilling. Rightly so Ramesh!

    Hank

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  9. wonderfully done, especially the second one

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  10. Two lovely images...
    the second won my heart.
    Thanks
    Peace
    Siggi

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  11. Beautifully done, Ramesh. Rocking chair and time make a beautiful combination.

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  12. Beautiful vivid haiku I could visualize so clearly =)

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  13. These beautiful haiku - the second took my breath away.

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  14. So beautiful...love the second one

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  15. Time is the secret treasurer of our memories...Very well said RS!!

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  16. Oh yes!, talking to oneself transiting in time.

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  17. "Birds sing her thoughts" -- Awww. ^_^

    Perfect, sir. :)

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  18. How beautiful this is. I can picture her sitting in her rtocking chair with the birds singing her thoughts. I do this myself in my shed in the garden, and I just drift away into my memories. Lovely haiku x

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  19. Ramesh,
    I really like the line "time moves back and forth". Wonderful haiku!
    Claudia

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  20. Beautiful Haiku! Loved them all.

    Time sitting in rocking chair is though provoking!

    www.numerounity.com

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  21. Good afternoon,
    This is a gorgeous haiku reflection on the passage of time!

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