Wednesday, April 9, 2014

CURTAINS FELL.. 3WW


Post # 899




Horrible, Listless, Moody..

CURTAINS FELL

Curtains fell, and he
looked at her with hope..
She wanted to say,
"Horrible, moody,
and listless performance, that!!"
yet she stopped and said,
"Wow, that was wonderful !!"
Indeed, his  behaviour could
comfortably hide behind his glitter
that sparkled in her eyes..


RS:)

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6 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaApril 9, 2014 at 1:02 PM

    WoW,that was wonderful!

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  2. Sheilagh LeeApril 9, 2014 at 2:45 PM

    ah that's sweet

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyApril 10, 2014 at 4:40 AM

    Social lies; the oil of daily life.

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  4. Jae RoseApril 10, 2014 at 5:25 AM

    This is a magical little poem..always good to see beyond the glitter

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  5. Belva Rae StaplesApril 10, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    It's a kind lady that notices the glitter in a man's eyes and does nothing to extinguish it. Well done!

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  6. Rashmirekha MannaApril 10, 2014 at 11:23 AM

    How many such "Wow, that was wonderful !!"s have helped us live from one such performance to another.... One really wonders.... what life would be without that one person at different stages in life who says this "Wow, that was wonderful !!".
    Who makes us feel LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL no matter what.

    Such a vital element of life, that nurtures and triggers growth and helps our Person branch out in various directions and not shy away, sketched so beautifully in so bright a scenery. Thanks for creating this :)
    Regards
    RM

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