Post # 898
Haiku for haiku Horizon
Prompt HOME..
I visited my hometown and went to have a look at my Childhood Home..
Here's an attempt to share what I heard, saw and felt in this cascading haiku...
Some tiny footprints
run behind each other;
my childhood home..
My childhood home;
I hear my mother calling me
out of thick darkness
Out of thick darkness
emerge glowing memories;
a car screams to halt
A car screams to halt;
no, none from childhood alights,
all unknown faces;
All unknown faces
yet appear familiar;
my childhood home
RS:)
A story there...
ReplyDeleteMissing my mum now...
And my home of course...
Nice!
Visit mine at: http://locomente.blogspot.com/2014/04/home-land.html
This is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteGoing home can evoke such powerful memories and emotions!
ReplyDeleteWinding Way Home
Emotive cascade. I have done this too - returning to your childhood home stirs so many hidden emotions. Marie
ReplyDeleteYour cascade is beautiful Ramesh
ReplyDeleteRamesh, I was drawn to re-read your haiku cascade and leave the first line out of each. When I read it as one poem without the repetition I was blown away. WOW!
ReplyDeleteOh, Judy..you made me too read it that way...thanks!!
DeleteRS:)
What a deep and lovely poem Thanks for taking me home with you.
ReplyDeleteSuch a nostalgic journey! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice cascade Ramesh ... full of strong memories.
ReplyDeletenice work !
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