Written for Haiku Horizon
It dawned on her
that pain couldn't stop the time;
beautiful sunset
Beautiful sunset;
ah, it will be another day,
it dawned on her
RS:)
It dawned on her
that pain couldn't stop the time;
beautiful sunset
Beautiful sunset;
ah, it will be another day,
it dawned on her
RS:)
I like how you "sandwiched" the haiku with "It dawned on her" - very creative and it really joins the two
ReplyDeleteYes, a fresh day will dawn and pain will dissipate. :-) Nice haikus.
ReplyDeleteThings that dawn on us sometimes do not thrill our souls!
ReplyDeleteWilderness at Dawn
I love how you managed to use more than one meaning of dawn.
ReplyDeleteWell said both ways!
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