Monday, November 3, 2014

Beautiful Sunset.. Haiku

Written for Haiku Horizon



It dawned on her
that pain couldn't stop the time;
beautiful sunset


Beautiful sunset;
ah, it will be another day,
it dawned on her


RS:)

5 comments:

  1. I like how you "sandwiched" the haiku with "It dawned on her" - very creative and it really joins the two

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  2. Yes, a fresh day will dawn and pain will dissipate. :-) Nice haikus.

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  3. Things that dawn on us sometimes do not thrill our souls!

    Wilderness at Dawn

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  4. I love how you managed to use more than one meaning of dawn.

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