Monday, November 17, 2014

Moon Gives A Cold Look..

Written for Haiku Horizon
Prompt: Cold



Mid November and
she exchanges pleasantries;
Moon gives a cold look



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Moon gives a cold look;
moonbeam melts on her warm face
without remorse


RS:)

11 comments:

  1. Thats so beautiful...
    And cheers that we both related cold and November!

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  2. Love how the moonbeam melts. Awesome imagery!

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  3. Very nice image! I can see the warmth in that face!

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  4. moonbea melts on her face - that is one lovely line, one lovely image

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  5. Very smooth and romantic (as usual).

    PS:
    I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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