Written for Haiku Horizon
Prompt: Cold
Mid November and
she exchanges pleasantries;
Moon gives a cold look
**
Moon gives a cold look;
moonbeam melts on her warm face
without remorse
RS:)
Prompt: Cold
Mid November and
she exchanges pleasantries;
Moon gives a cold look
**
Moon gives a cold look;
moonbeam melts on her warm face
without remorse
RS:)
Thats so beautiful...
ReplyDeleteAnd cheers that we both related cold and November!
Great personification!
ReplyDeletebeautiful...
ReplyDeleteO that icy look from the moon! Makes me shudder!
ReplyDeleteLingering Cold
Cool moon !
ReplyDeleteLove how the moonbeam melts. Awesome imagery!
ReplyDeleteVery nice image! I can see the warmth in that face!
ReplyDeletemoonbea melts on her face - that is one lovely line, one lovely image
ReplyDeleteBeautiful !
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteVery smooth and romantic (as usual).
ReplyDeletePS:
I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.
https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/