Friday, December 26, 2014

Sound of My Footsteps.. Haiku..

Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart

Friday




Five pigeons walk with
spring in their feet just ahead;
sound of my footsteps



Sound of my footsteps;
Five pigeons fluttering wings
fly over my head..




RS:)







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8 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxDecember 26, 2014 at 10:51 AM

    Happy Holidays Ramesh

    much love...

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  2. J CDecember 26, 2014 at 11:29 AM

    I can imagine the scene, you, the pigeons, and suddenly they fly. Nice haiku!

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  3. LauraDecember 26, 2014 at 12:16 PM

    beautiful transition Ramesh!

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  4. Judith WesterfieldDecember 26, 2014 at 5:15 PM

    Your haiku brought back a memory of a pigeon flying overhead and it pooed on my husband's head! I couldn't stop laughing - he wasn't amused at the time!

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  5. rebeccaDecember 26, 2014 at 6:37 PM

    yes, ramesh-you have captured the passage of time so cleverly!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 27, 2014 at 3:06 AM

    smiles,
    your haiku always inspire.

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  7. Lisa at GreenbowDecember 27, 2014 at 4:33 AM

    I can see those pigeons swooping up in a noisy clammering into the sky.

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  8. gmaDecember 27, 2014 at 7:13 AM

    Your words paint a beautiful picture.

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