Sunday, December 28, 2014

A Statue of Dreams - Haiku

Haiku for Haiku Horizons
Prompt: Just




'Just a moment, wait',
and then the years rolled by;
a statue of dreams



RS:)

9 comments:

  1. Ramesh! That is one of your BEST haiku ever. Such truth powerfully expressed in 3 lines.
    When I find myself on-hold, waiting for "just a moment" I will think of you and your poem.

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  2. This has a great space-time warp feeling about it. Time is slow then suddenly very far past. Good work. I enjoyed this.
    Alice

    PS Sorry. WP still won't allow comments on B. Here is my link:
    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/12/28/just-another/

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  3. sometimes wait is forever.. loved this haiku.

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  4. Very nice! You captured a novel in 3 lines.

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  5. So very true, how time flies faster and faster each year.

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  6. Speaks volumes for such few words. This is so true. Time flies indeed. Well, I hope you get to do the things you have always wanted before it's too late. :)

    Happy 2015!

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