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Sunday, December 28, 2014
A Statue of Dreams - Haiku
Haiku for Haiku Horizons Prompt: Just
'Just a moment, wait', and then the years rolled by; a statue of dreams
Ramesh! That is one of your BEST haiku ever. Such truth powerfully expressed in 3 lines. When I find myself on-hold, waiting for "just a moment" I will think of you and your poem.
Speaks volumes for such few words. This is so true. Time flies indeed. Well, I hope you get to do the things you have always wanted before it's too late. :)
Ramesh! That is one of your BEST haiku ever. Such truth powerfully expressed in 3 lines.
ReplyDeleteWhen I find myself on-hold, waiting for "just a moment" I will think of you and your poem.
This has a great space-time warp feeling about it. Time is slow then suddenly very far past. Good work. I enjoyed this.
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sometimes wait is forever.. loved this haiku.
ReplyDeleteLove it! So true....
ReplyDeleteVery nice! You captured a novel in 3 lines.
ReplyDeleteSo very true, how time flies faster and faster each year.
ReplyDeleteSpeaks volumes for such few words. This is so true. Time flies indeed. Well, I hope you get to do the things you have always wanted before it's too late. :)
ReplyDeleteHappy 2015!
dreams come in sets,
ReplyDeletewell done,
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