Thursday, January 8, 2015

Vanishing Circles.. Haiku



Written for Haiku Horizons..

Prompt; Circle..

Shared with Friday's Haiku  My Heart


Hopeful raindrops fall
in the puddle of water;
vanishing circles


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Vanishing circles
of my friends from all stages;
musty, rough weathers


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Musty , rough weathers;
ah, forming newer circles 
life goes in circles...

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Life goes in circles;
she keeps holding my hand tight
lest I fall away..


RS:)

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7 comments:

  1. AliceJanuary 8, 2015 at 7:31 PM

    This haiku cascade pulled my heart and brought tears to my eyes. The vanishing circles and new circles come with a kind of rootless sadness. Then her hand is there as an anchor. And I know too well that even that will be spun away. Excellent work.


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  2. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 8, 2015 at 9:03 PM

    Ramesh,
    One of the most beautiful haiku-flow you've written. The last line is so perfect. It should be put to music.

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  3. UnknownJanuary 8, 2015 at 9:09 PM

    Beyond my comprehension I suppose...

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  4. J CJanuary 12, 2015 at 10:39 AM

    very beautiful Ramesh. I can visualize it all through your words.

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  5. rebeccaJanuary 13, 2015 at 9:57 AM

    holding your hand too my dear friend through all the seasons.
    ah, this haiku circle.
    xo

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  6. Lux G.January 18, 2015 at 7:35 AM

    Hi, Ramesh. I like simple poems with deep meanings. Life is indeed a cycle. It's a circle of like. :)

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