Monday, January 19, 2015

I Gift Her Haiku...

Haiku Horizons.. 
Prompt Show

Shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..


A Haiku's lament;
"Why show a picture with me,
then what will I show"


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She shows me night sky
and a half cut hanging Moon;
I gift her haiku


RS:)

7 comments:

  1. I love the second haiku - "half cut hanging moon" is WONDERFUL!

    I'm not quite sure about the first haiku. I can't get my brain to work!
    Is this the gist (in my words)?

    A Haiku's lament;
    "Why show a picture to me?
    nothing left to know"

    If not,



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    1. Judy, Haiku is supposed to let the reader create a visual in the mind.. That's what has been the purpose of my write-up..Hope it clarifies..

      Your write in fact too give a meaning like that..

      RS

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  2. I love "a half cut hanging moon." Brilliant!. :-)

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  3. What a lovely sesries...the first prepares us for a true show of a tender image...beautifully penned!!

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  4. I know I can count on you for a bit of romance. I especially sighed with the second.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/01/21/road-to-paradise/

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