Sunday, March 29, 2015

Silence of the Sunrise: Haiku

My post no.. 999



A Haiku for Haiku Horizons..Prompt: Sleep.



Silence of the  Sunrise


Raindrops, moonbeams hit
her window panes together;
she smiles in sleep


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She smiles in sleep;
silence of the sunrise 
quietly wakes her up 



RS:)




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7 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 29, 2015 at 10:33 PM

    Very nice and tender!

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  2. VinatiMarch 30, 2015 at 1:33 AM

    such a lovely imagery

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  3. AnonymousMarch 30, 2015 at 4:35 AM

    very nicely done.

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  4. Judith WesterfieldMarch 30, 2015 at 8:08 AM

    "silence of sunrise" - perfect line

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  5. AnonymousMarch 31, 2015 at 4:48 AM

    lovely RS... do read mine too when time permits... would love to get your feedback, as I am new to the Haiku world...
    http://drishti.co/2015/03/30/flirting-with-sleep/
    Thank you :)

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  6. Kokila guptaMarch 31, 2015 at 8:10 AM

    Beautiful ...

    PS.. unlike other sites, I am repeating this word in my comments to your haikus again n again as this is what I feel here again n again ... beautiful, spellbound and meaningful !

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  7. rallentandaMarch 31, 2015 at 8:32 AM

    haiku
    bathed
    in light

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