A Little More Than Ordinary...: Sun Blazes Anew ..Haiku..

Monday, March 9, 2015

Haiku Horizons Prompt Refuge
Shared with Haiku My Heart

Sun blazes anew;

I take refuge behind

my own old beliefs

My own old beliefs;

I feel disturbed when she

hides behind her past

RS:)

J CMarch 9, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Interesting. Leaves a lot to imagination.
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AliceMarch 9, 2015 at 8:55 AM
This is a relationship dance fully expressed in two short poems. Well done.

https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/03/09/the-first-sign-of-my-exile/
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AnonymousMarch 9, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Intriguing and well written.
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Bastet's Waka LibraryMarch 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM
interesting this haiku set ... very interesting! Bastet
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UnknownMarch 11, 2015 at 6:51 AM
Intriguing pair of haiku!
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Rashmirekha MannaMarch 14, 2015 at 11:54 PM
My own old beliefs
The mirror I show others
refuses to be one when I look at it

Moral of the story I can't write a Haiku :)

But you certainly do know how to write a beautiful one

Regards
RM :)
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Kokila guptaMarch 17, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Beautiful..intriguing and definitely layered ...In one word - RICH !
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