Monday, March 9, 2015

Sun Blazes Anew ..Haiku..



Haiku Horizons Prompt Refuge
Shared with Haiku My Heart



Sun blazes anew;
I take refuge behind
my own old beliefs


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My own old beliefs;
I feel disturbed when she 
hides behind her past



RS:) 


7 comments:

  1. Interesting. Leaves a lot to imagination.

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  2. This is a relationship dance fully expressed in two short poems. Well done.


    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/03/09/the-first-sign-of-my-exile/

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  3. interesting this haiku set ... very interesting! Bastet

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  4. My own old beliefs
    The mirror I show others
    refuses to be one when I look at it


    Moral of the story I can't write a Haiku :)

    But you certainly do know how to write a beautiful one

    Regards
    RM :)

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  5. Beautiful..intriguing and definitely layered ...In one word - RICH !

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