Sunday, June 19, 2011

A Haiku for Haiku Heights and OSI...



My second post for OSI:  Wind  and
first for Haiku Heights : Blind..



Strong wind carries dust
Makes me close my eyes, ah,
Feels softer on skin..

 
BY: RS  : )
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11 comments:

  1. PamJune 19, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    By your third line I see the dust as the finest face powder. Very different from living in a coastal area where the "dust" is changed to coarse sand. I love the sigh at the end of the second line (wind again)

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  2. AnonymousJune 19, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    So beautiful and refreshing

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  3. AnonymousJune 19, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    that is graphic...well said!

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  4. Sherri B.June 19, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    If I closed my eyes, I could feel the sand...very visual haiku!

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  5. The PoetJune 19, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    Ramesh, you make us see and feel with your words.

    Well done!

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  6. Rashmirekha MannaJune 20, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    Wow... reminds me of the dust storms... that soothe in the hot summers.... as soothing and calming words, sir...


    Regards

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  7. Gowthami NandigalaJune 20, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    Oh..soft and sweet...ur words made me feel the freshness:)

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  8. UnknownJune 20, 2011 at 4:22 PM

    Ahhh... this is how I felt upon reading your sweet offering. Thank you!

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/bella/

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  9. JingleJune 21, 2011 at 1:48 AM

    very sweet indeed.

    superb Haiku.

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  10. AmityJune 21, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    we would try to hide our eyes...
    and yeah, feels softer on skin...
    but not for the eyes to appreciate

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  11. gautami tripathyJune 23, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    Nice work!

    fruits dance on the walls

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