Saturday, June 18, 2011

Tasty Stories Flow....




Haikus for OSI Prompt... WIND  ..thanks to Dani for the prompt...
Also placed in Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..


Tree full of fruits, shares
Juicy tales with the winds, and
Tasty stories flow…



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A strong gush of wind
Strands of her hair fall on face
Moon behind clouds..


 
by   RS  : )
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 18, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    Beautiful and meaningful!

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  2. JimJune 18, 2011 at 10:03 PM

    I'm liking her face with fallen strands of hair.
    Seems great minds tonight ... work the wind with the hair and face.
    ..

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  3. Harshad MehtaJune 18, 2011 at 11:56 PM

    When I read it first time, I liked second one. It has romantic appeal.

    On reading second time, I like for sure the first one.

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  4. AmityJune 19, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Made me smile Ramesh!

    "especially the juicy tells"
    winds are silent witnesses! :P

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  5. Vinay Leo R.June 19, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    Oh yes, and it shares the fruit with the earth too :) Beautiful images! Thank you for sharing.

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  6. GeraldineJune 19, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    tasty indeed, this brought a smile to my face!

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  7. The PoetJune 19, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    I echo everybody's sentiments, Ramesh.
    My favorite is the first one.

    A nice Sunday treat.
    Thank you.

    Best wishes.

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  8. Tumblewords:June 19, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    These are both wonderfully well imaged!

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  9. Rashmirekha MannaJune 20, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    Beautiful metaphors sir, as usual and as beautiful :)


    Regards

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  10. UnknownJune 20, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    Utterly adore that first poem. Makes the connections we share with the natural world so real.
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/bella/

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  11. PremIJune 21, 2011 at 2:17 AM

    Lovely...
    Tasty...
    Beauty!:)

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  12. The Write GirlJune 21, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Delicious and beautiful haikus...love the imagery here.

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  13. PattiJune 22, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    Both are beautiful~ The second one is intriguing- it makes me imagine so much more...

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  14. Cassiopeia RisesJune 22, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    Lovely Haiku my friend. Excellent....


    Melanie

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