Saturday, July 30, 2011

Uncomfortable Confession...


Written for OSI : Uncomfortable
Haiku Heights   : Confession

Uncomfortable

Invading my space
And  telling me not to feel
Uncomfortable


You are so gracious
For at least not asking me
To pretend comfort..

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Uncomfortable
Moon tries to see through thick clouds
Must be missing me..

Well that should make you
Happy, you are not alone
Who’s stung by conceit..


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How can one answer
Uncomfortable question
“ Hey, do you like me?”


Answering is tough
Yes, but then asking like that
Indeed courageous..

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Confession

“Hey, are you waiting
For a confession?” “No.” Still
Burdened forever..


By:  RS : )

30 comments:

  1. Thanks for sharing these... I like the examples on Confession.

    I am going to try them too~

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  2. Maybe the slightest resemblance to mine, Rameshji. nothing more of a connection, I felt :) but it was like different from what you usually write in a way.

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  3. some truth on these 'kus. i've actually experienced the first one hehe

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  4. Great writing here. The ones about discomfort are ones I can especially relate to, with both of my parents recently moving in with me.

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  5. You must be a proffessional haiku writer :)

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  6. very intense Haiku this week Ramesh great reads for this weeks HH and OSI!

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  7. I loved the last one.

    Waiting for a confession?

    "burdened forever"

    That is so true.

    This is a beautiful post.

    I really loved it and it spoke to me on a deep level.

    keep writing!

    Indie

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  8. Uncomfortable analysed in every way. Excellently done.

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  9. Excellent! I Like both on uncomfortable and confession.

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  10. "Moon’s uncomfortable
    Struggles to see through thick clouds
    Must be missing me.."

    stunning! wonderful responses to the prompts!

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  11. I found you through Haiku-Heights.
    Your honesty shines through.

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  12. Some very honest observations come through.

    Well done!

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  13. LOL!! you made me smile RS!!...with your uncomfortable confessions!! Made me squirm uneasily too!! :D Good ideas in words RS!!

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  14. The moon haiku is perfect, like them all.

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  15. I really like that first set!

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  16. I read in awe, friend
    From the depths of your true heart
    A gift to readers.


    I saw your Haiku on Haiku Heights and love your site. I am Laurie from Hibernationnow.wordpress.com

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  17. Back again RS for you have erred :)

    To err is human
    Uncomfortable is 5
    Confession to make

    In all good humor RS!!

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  18. OOPs... thanks Nanka...I have corrected.. good to find someone helping me improve..

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  19. many possibilities...well said!

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  20. invading my space and telling me not to feel Uncomfortable... I often questioned myself what does this my space means? with a new soul entering my life and sharing all of me, why then I felt strangled because I lost the freedom I enjoyed. Then I learned that life is better with sacrifices and not with compromises.

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  21. My favorite is the waiting for a confession. That is a tall order, Ramesh.
    ..

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  22. Great set covering all the basis of uncomfortable and confessions!

    Well done!

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  23. I love the invitation to be honest!

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  24. Great writing!
    Especially the first part and the last one.

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  25. lovely!

    http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/07/confession.html

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  26. I have learned a lot from this poem. Thank you!

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  27. Meaningful reflections. Well done, again!

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  28. I just love it RS..

    Someone is Special

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  29. There are some things, I suppose, that I will never confess!

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