Saturday, November 2, 2013

Morning Dew .. Haiku



Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Grass



Tiny strands
of wet grass hug her bare feet;
morning dew


RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 3, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    Very nicely said. Good job.

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  2. UnknownNovember 3, 2013 at 9:06 AM

    Brilliant! They tend to hug those shoes too! ♥

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  3. cherylNovember 3, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    Very sweet Ramesh

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  4. Gillena CoxNovember 3, 2013 at 11:21 AM

    nice one Ramesh

    much love...

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  5. AnonymousNovember 3, 2013 at 11:28 AM

    "HUG" - perfect word for wonderful imagery!!!!!!

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  6. The Write GirlNovember 3, 2013 at 7:25 PM

    Delicate, beautiful verses Ramesh. We can visualize her movement in grass.

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  7. World So WideNovember 4, 2013 at 3:35 AM

    I can feel the dew on the bare feet :)

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  8. ReshmaNovember 5, 2013 at 12:06 PM

    The feeling of fresh dew and tender grass caressing feet is heavenly...Feeling blissful RS:)

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  9. UnknownNovember 7, 2013 at 1:33 AM

    Walking on grass, wet with dew, is heavenly.

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  10. Eliz FrankNovember 8, 2013 at 4:46 AM

    Excellent. Well said.
    Eliz

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  11. kalpana solsiNovember 8, 2013 at 7:09 AM

    A morning walk , bare-feet , on grass is wonderful.

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  12. rudraprayagaNovember 8, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    Well-penned.Nice.

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  13. AnonymousNovember 8, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    So beautiful x

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  14. Jyotsna BhatiaNovember 12, 2013 at 6:43 AM

    ahaa :) lovely

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  15. AnonymousNovember 12, 2013 at 8:10 PM

    I can feel the moisture of the grasses. Lovely poem.

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  16. AnonymousJune 16, 2015 at 8:23 PM

    Oh... how lovely... so finally I get to read this... :-)
    beautiful, RS :-) Thanks for sharing...

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